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for Jason and You Makes Two

by pesterme2

person Jetfire
schedule June 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
EEEVIL!!!! MOOOOORE.....WHEN ARE THEY GOING TO GET TOGETHER?! PLEEEEEASSSSSE *falls to knees and kisses feet* Please give me more.

Hugs aduial
person PaxNodoz
schedule June 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful chapter as usual :D keep it going!

It took me some time to read, since I can't find the energy to do anything this week. My, now former, best friend started a little fight with me. That was the first happening. Yesterday, I got to know she had black talked me to my boyfriend by telling him I didn't care about others only myself, he should get a new, nice girlfriend and so on... well, after knowing that it all felt much worse. I know I was wrong for the first fight, but she overreacted a lot. And then this? I decided to never forgive her. Because today, my boyfriend DID break up with me. 1 year and a half month long relationship, just gone. I feel a bit down, so I'm going to one of my closer friends' house for one night. Life is a roller-coaster.
schedule June 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Simon must have been impressed w/Mark's knowledge of architecture! It'll be good if they start hanging out together. Altho I think if they do, they'll just fall for each other quicker. Hmmmmm, I guess they're doomed! hahaha

Can't wait for the next chapter! Oooohhhh, I forgot, I just READ the next chapter! hehehehhe
person Ingwalde
schedule June 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
more! I need more, pleeeeease! I love how Mark just seems like a big paradox sometimes; he's so self-deprecating at times and at others he's very blunt/outspoken. You can see why Simon's so into him, Mark is just one big walking puzzle.

Oh, and so can't wait to see what evil plans you've got cookin' to get Mark back in school. It just seems like the only way that Mark would accept any help would be if were some sort of loan or tuition reimbursement type thing through his new employer.
person oo
schedule June 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
what a cute story. ya know... some jobs offer to pay for you to go back to school.... maybe where marks working now, maybe hell get hooked up in that way somehow...or maybe hell be making enough money now to go back to school part time. lols. im getting into the story way to much. its like im trying to help mark work his problems out.
it surprised and pleased simon that mark like architecture... i liked that.
they are perfect for each other. argh. i hope it doesnt work out with jason. quickly!
person PaxNodoz
schedule June 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I just got back from my little vacation. Got a well needed haircut (got about 20cm shorter hair now, maybe more) and a nice tan since I fell asleep one of the rare sunny days. My best friend didn't recognize me when I got home!

My brain is working somewhat, I'm continuing where my sister left off with trying to get myself to drink coffee. 2 hours since my last cup, it's 01:46 atm and I'm dead tired. I'm keeping the review kind of short.

Simon! I like Simon. He's nice. And I've got a cousin with the same name and the same personality strange enough. But my cousin is not drop-dead gorgeous sadly, he's a bit more dorky-but-charming. I really hope Mark will just really dump Jason so he can go on with his life.
person Ingwalde
schedule June 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
How the heck did this get to 11 chapters already?! Um, I, uh guess I need to check for updates more often. And dang it, I missed the Simon clones! :( It would have gone so nice with my Jayden clone...or, would that work? *drifts off, pondering*

So yeah, back to the reviewing thing. This is actually turning out quite nicely. Not that it feels like it's got quite the longevity that AC has but hey, it's turning out pretty well. But then why do I have this feeling that Mark's not gonna get his head out of his posterior (pun might be intended)for quite a while and going to need LOTS and LOTS of therapy to get over the whole needing to make it on his own thing?
person Jetfire
schedule June 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yes very very bad bad bad bad bad bad place to stop. Oh and do we not as your loyal and trusting fans, deserve a simon and mark sex scene soon? Please one with details and long....not jsut they shagged and done.

I looove this story its sooooooo good and i'm begging you *falls on knees and kisses feet* to please please please put them together already. Yes?

Huggins Aduial
schedule June 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ok, I see the changes, I think: the original chapter didn't have Mark talking to Simon about the construction job, right? Wyatt is gonna turn out to be Simon's dad, right? I mean Wyatt is their last name, right?

Great chapter, as usual! I love the way they flirt w/each other and I don't think Mark's gonna be able to resist Simon for much longer! hahaha

Now, go start working on the next one! :)
schedule June 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I forgot this in my review: I never pictured Mark as a top. When he was envisioning what it would feel like to sink inside Simon, I always thought he was a bottom. Wasn't he a bottom w/Jason? Or does he switch back and forth? Just curious in my pervy mind! Or is it pervie? Idk....