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where is the update for this?????

I like the characters in this story and I really do like Simon alot. I'm still a bit confused how Jason is going to come into this. Are they gonna make it a three-some?

I LOVE THIS STORY. I read it all from start to the latest chapter all in one go because it was so addicting. I was really glad that the plot wasn't simply Guy A breaking up with evil Boyfriend A and letting Boyfriend B come and sweep him off his feet. It was definitely more realistic than that, what with how you haven't just made Jason into some typicial evil boyfriend, and how you showed that they really were/are still in love with each other. I love how all the characters have flaws, and how both of Mark's relationships aren't completely perfect, with each of them having pros and cons. Not to mention how you're handling Simon's bottoming problems! I really like Mark's character too.

Another thing I found veeery interesting was Simon's attraction to Jason. and I was wondering if your M/M/M warning in the summary was referring to just the love triangle or an actual threesome relationship. As much as I like all three characters, Mark more so than the others, I really hope it just ends with two of them lol. I have nothing against threesomes, I just feel like in this particular situation it would be a tad too problematic. But oh well, you're the author, and I'll keep reading no matter what the endgame haha. You're a fantastic writer, of both plot and hot hot smut, so I hope you'll continue with all your stories. :) Can't wait for more!

Hello!

Just found your story yesterday and read it all up today. I have really loved the story so far.
The boys are hot and so is their relationship yet its interesting to read about their lows just as much as the highs.
Its hard to find good dramatic stories these days that have a realistic storyline and you have done a great job!

Keep on typing and I'll keep on reading :D

Aaaaaaaaaah!! AAAAAAAAAAH!H!!!HH!!!! Lori!!!!!!!!!!! YOU FREAKING UPDATED THIS ONE!?
as I re-read the previous chapter, I realised once again why THIS STORY IS SO EXCITING!!! (actually, honestly, ALL your stories are BLOODY exciting) but well, just let me go crazy and happy over this update ok? 8D

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHH!!!!! XD
Like hell yeah? Coz, knowing the hell you have to go through in life, and how busy you are, and you managed to get a update through?! AMAZING and of cause, THANK YOU!!!! *hugs your ferociously* Thank yoooooooooooooooou!!!

anyway, back to proper reviewing.
Awesome development! This chapter opens a brand new .... i don't know, note taking? It like, tells so much more about Simon's "issue" with being the bottom. Initially, I was very much thinking just like Mark. That perhaps, Simon just wasn't being treated right the other times, and maybe those guys he was with were too big.
so with small cute normal sized mark, who's careful and caring, it should be okay. I really thought it would be O KAY.

But as Mark went on - and btw, Mark is a very very careful and caring top, I applaude him for that, but I suppose, being a frequent bottom helps bring the caring side out of you more when you finally do top? But, I also guess it's partly because when Mark was with Jason, he was a rather caring top too. I stray!.
Mark was going step by step, in textbook order or something. So perfectly, yet. YET!!! Simon still couldn't take it!!! Why!!!? Is this some sort of medical condition??? I mean.... Yeah, I have read, and heard of 'always painful penetration' for gays, but usually, once the prostrate get's hit on, it's an Okay.
But not with Simon.... I wonder really.

I hope that perhaps, you will disclose his 'condition' to us? It's really intriguing this, Simon.

oh yeah...
DO NOT THINK I'VE FORGOTTEN ABOUT JASON!
(I mean, his NAME is right there in the tittle for gawds sake, any reader who forgets Jason should be -word is censored- !!! )
I haven't forgotten that little tiny hint of potential bromance between Simon and Jason!!! I still remember it! and I'm still wondering over it!!! So please, yeah....... just do your thing ;3

*sighs* thanks again for the update ^__________^ I feel so happy and satisfied after reading it. *sighs*. It's a similar feeling one get's after eating a good meal.

and instead of a usual 'pesteryou for a new chapter', I think I'll leave this for you;
I wish you well in life, and hope that good stuff and positive stuff will come down the path you're on~ And if things don't turn out well, don't feel bad, and don't become 'negative'. Believe in yourself, and remain positive no matter how hard things get, please TRUST me on this on. I've tried it. and it really truly does work. Thinking positive, being confident, and sure of yourself, and reminding yourself that you are only human, helps you become a stronger person to face whatever challenges life has ready to throw at you.

Stay strong Lori! *hug hug*

- nekoii

glad to see you back! :)
can we pleassseeee see more of jason....totally love him again now :D

Hey,

Thanks for this, was awesome once more. Anyway nobody should complain about slow updates unless they write themselves and update like everyweek (which hardly anyone does and those that do are 90% bad) so don't listen to their crap.
Took me 2 years to finish one of my stories. I'm not sure if I reviewed flaming, because I was in some hotel, somewhere can't remember where so if I didn't feel reviewed because that was aweseome too.

Loads of hugginses for you
Aduial

Oh man, poor Simon! Mark may have to abandon his plan to top. Maybe if he just spent more time on Simon; prepare him better, use dildos or vibrators, or whatever. I know Simon said he tried those (I think he said that), but Idk...maybe if he's more relaxed. Oh, I know! Mark should get him wasted; maybe then it'll work! lol

Hey, you haven't been on and updated for quite a while now. Just wondering if your still alive if so you should really update this. please alright well give it a try thanks.
Allie

This is one of my favorite stories on AFF. Please keep up the great writing.