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May 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Just when I thought things could not get any better, along comes Tep-tep the dog-god-man. I love it. Menefer seems to be a man magnet. Poor Harley is going to have his hands full. Menefer was very naughty to be teasing Harley while he was talking with that customer. It seems though that Harley has taken well to dealing with Menefer and his antics. He needs to put all these guys to work fixing up the store. I am glad that Menefer has Tep-Tep. I am sure Sophie probably wants to move out. We used to have a white cat a long time ago. They get so grumpy when their routine is disturbed. This whole chapter mad me laugh. Good job.
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April 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This story is pretty amazing. Menefer’s story is so intriguing and sad. Menefer is such an innocent even though he has been alive for so many years. Even his adult desires for love and sex are pure and not corrupt. I am glad they did visit Grandfather's grave. I really enjoy reading this story. It is fascinating.
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April 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really love this new story. I love everything to do with Egypt and ancient artifacts. Menefer is a mystery. Does he even know what he is? I also wonder how he ended up being bought and sold. I think it is very cute that Harvey's mom likes Amon. I know it pisses Harvey off but it is very cute. I also love Menefer's personality. He is so innocent even though he has lived for so long. I can't wait to read some more. Very good start.
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April 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Love chapter 4. Yummy sex scene! Menefer is a determined fellow. I think Harvey will get used to being molested. He took right to it. However it would be strange to be mistaken for his grandfather. Menefer is so sweet though. He is obviously in need of affection and he has already become attracted to Harvey. I just hope Amonnen will not become too jealous. Maybe running the store will keep them distracted. I am looking forward to the next chapter.
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April 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
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