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by TheronVanyr

schedule October 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Please update this story! I really wanna know what happens next :)
person amatista
schedule December 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
actualiza pronto, por favor
person kylee123
schedule August 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh Menefer! Where are you?
person kylee123
schedule July 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Vanyr thanks for all the great updates this weekend. How nice of Harley to be willing to share Menefer with Amonen. I guess he can understand how painful it would be for Amonen to watch the relationship when he also has a crush on Menefer. I am praying that they will escape before the bad guys show up. It seems like the pendant they found would put Menefer under their control. I hope they don't get their evil hands on the poor boy again.
person kylee123
schedule July 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yaay! Harley actually seduced Menefer this time. I am happy! I imagine that there will soon be trouble to come with that vision that Menefer had. Did Amonen ever have his date with Harley's mother? Love the story. I can't wait to read more
person Erica
schedule July 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This story is great. I love it.
person kylee123
schedule July 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Update soon please. I love Menefer! I miss him and his sweet personality.
person NecroKitty
schedule June 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
this is a pretty good story i like the characters and everything but maybe you should get someone to review the chapters before you post them or something like that. also i would like to know why the main character has two names for the first part of the story he's Harvey and in the last couple chapters he's Harley?
person kylee123
schedule May 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Poor Tep Tep had to give up his humanity to become Menefer's guardian. How sad. I am glad that Harley's mother is taking Amonen out. I think they would make an awesome couple - especially because Amonen is younger than she is. Thanks for updating. As usual I have fallen in love with all the characters in this story. I wonder if Tep-Tep and Sophie will be enemies forever? I love their antics.
person kylee
schedule May 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I miss Menefer/ Update soon please?