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for For the Endless Night

by NeverFroze

person Raya
schedule July 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
It's good. I am definitely looking forward to new chapters
person Qiana
schedule May 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was so good I love it
person mw0627
schedule May 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow that guy needs to watch more tv, he seems way too naive. Oh yeah sure i'll take strange drugs.
person MissMiki
schedule April 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well I liked it :) i'm a sucker (no pun intended) for patient characters :D love it!
person Irukichan
schedule April 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I've read a couple of chapters of your main fic quite some time before and it wasn't my type of story, but I'm really feeling this one a lot so far and am looking forward to seeing what happens. Nice writing style and while we haven't seen a lot into the characters, they too seem to be very likable :>
schedule April 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
hmmm I liked it. poor Caleo, first time alone in the big scary outside world and he actually managed to get himself in a gay bar and almost rapped...
btw I'm not familiar with his name, how should I read it? ca--leo or cal--eo?
update soon please
person maloanne
schedule April 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Interesting first chapter!
M
person kleoolxD
schedule April 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
wow, it's so sad, having to live in a hospital. Amazing beginning, though. Can't wait for an update XD
person Anon
schedule April 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
*squeak* No, Caleo! Save him, save hiiiiiiiim! *spazzes*

Okay, now, I'm feeling a bit more coherent. This is intriguing and wonderful so far, though I did notice a few typos. Nothing huge that would throw off the reader for more than a second, but they're still there. Other than that, like I said, this is amazing and I'm glad I read this. =)
person dekorx
schedule April 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i like it so far though i was expecting val to come save cal ! :( update soon!