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April 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Nicely written, and I understand the logic she used easily. Nearly been there before. I think the scene was written just fine. It's not overly descriptive, but it's just enough to still allow the mind to wander without being completely vague either. Good job.
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April 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I loved it. I truely thought she would just kill him and escape, but what you had her do was much more... Captivating if thats the right word.