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person magz
schedule January 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Most EVIL cliffhanger ever! I love you!
person Senna-chan
schedule January 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
The tension and cliff-hangers are going to be the end of me! XD

Eventhough Adam rejected Gordon, I couldn't help but notice that he didn't outward denied all sex. Just for now. Let's just hope Gordon's in one piece after his encouter with Alex Samus. And that Adam has a pretty good explanation for being so nice close with Carla. Although I do remember him sending that drink to her few chapters back. Hmm...

Please update soon.
person Akari
schedule January 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm a fan of your work too and I was really happy today to find this story. I really liked it and I look forward to next chapter:)
person JeAnEttE
schedule January 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
no! How could you leave it like that...what a horrible cliffhanger...

I wonder what happened to Gordon - hmmm...maybe he was drugged...by Chance? After all he did let him have his drink...

I wonder what is going to happen to Gordon now...especailly after Alex came after him...I hope you update soon...I'm on the edge of my seat.
person Toni
schedule January 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Just wow. I look forward to more
person J42
schedule January 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Love it! Poor G looks like he's heading for some hurt with Alex!
person Gracie
schedule January 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
sweet magnetic jesus on a dashboard we need a new chapter! like..right now! D:
person oo
schedule January 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
chills, ive got freaking chills. you are so mean for leaving it there. you better updat super fast.
was he stabbed, or is just getting beat up?
whatever happens, i know hes going to survive. hes the main character ya know. lol.
ok, maybe this will be the final straw and gordon will finally get away from the drug business stuff....please? and then he and adam date!
chance gave him a drugged drink. maybe even set up that twin guy outside waiting, maybe.
schedule January 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Love this story, spent hours (literally, about.. 10 hours) reading your story yesterday and today, it's really hard to stop once you start. Hope the next update is soon!
person y
schedule January 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
interesting. the mystery behind adam is making my head kinda hurt too. haha :D