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I read this last night but didn't have a chance to review. Now I am :) I just want to say what an intense chapter!! I feel so, so bad for Gordan right now, I can't imagine the kind of pain he's in; just thinking about it now, again, is making me feel all bad. Although I never liked Alex (or his brother) I now severely loathe him. I'm hoping he's going to get what he deserves. Not just for what he did to Gordan (that's most of it, though), but what he's done to other people. He's a sick fuck. I hope the person that's cutting him off is Adam, and I hope he's planning on doing some shit to Alex. If it's not him, the only other person I can think of that would be trying to rescue Gordan is Carla--though I can't see her knowing where Alex was headed. Now, Adam, I can.

But oh my god, please, please do not keep us waiting. This cliffhanger is going to kill me. Literally.

One thing that really annoys me about this story is how utterly perfect Carla is, so much that she almost seems Mary Sueish. Otherwise, it's really interesting and fun to read.

I'm happy to see another chapter of AM. You left us in suspense last time. Not that things are really solved with this new chapter... You always leave us wanting more, Mr. S! After the long torture paragraphs, I am hoping for some comfort now. Your poor Gordon deserves a break after all he's been through.

I have to tell you I squealed like a fangirl when I saw there was an update! Poor Gordon! Dx I am sooo glade Adam is saving him! I can't wait for the next chapter! I hope you get the swing of your job x3.

WOW great and very intense chapter!
I couldn´t stop thinking about his lost hair...well Adam should have killed both brothers.

I really like this story. It is so original and doesn't follow the Mary Sue(male version) plot that so many stories do. I also like how the characters develop their feelings rather than just have them outright. I hope Marquis and Chance gets theirs because I am so sick of them giving Goordon so much shit. Please continue!

Dude, if I'm ever in new york I'm going to hunt your ass down and kick it.

hope the update is soon, been checking every day, the cliffy is a killer

I just finished all 10 chapters and this is probably one of the best stories on aff. The character developement, pace of the story, and story line is just amazing! I love the main character and i hope nothing too bad happens to him! Anyways, I am eagerly anticipating the next chapter, so i hope you will update soon!

I just read all 10 available chapters and I gotta say I freakin loved it! and I can't even begin to describe how frustrated I am right now with that evil, EVIL cliffhanger you left us with. why do all the interesting authors here hv a penchant for torturing their readers like that, huh? you're all so mean *sigh* please do update soon ;)