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March 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
how sad, there is so much tension between G and Adam, I hope they are able to mend things in between them. Looks to me like Adam may have been jealous - especailly when he saw G and Jay together. I hope he comes back. I thought it was interesting to have him in Vermont at Adam's old house. thanks for the update - you totally made me happy today! Update soon <3
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March 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yay for the updating! I'm feeling for both Gordon and Adam. Cause Gordon is all sorts of emotionally traumatized and Adam doesn't know how to deal with that(and possibly also emotionally traumatized...) Either way, it is very difficult for them to be on the same page. I look forward to more!
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March 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
please update soon! love this story, been checking every day :)
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March 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I've been reading this story every free fucking second I had for the past two days. I'm so damn hooked, I barely have anything coherent to say at the moment cause FFFFFFFFFFFFF. UPDAAAATE. Must know. MUST. KNOW. Email my ass when you update, pretty fucking please? moomoocanwalk@yahoo.com
also; don't laugh at my email lol. made that shit when i was like. 11. kept it ever since.
also; don't laugh at my email lol. made that shit when i was like. 11. kept it ever since.
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February 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG this chapter totally messed with my emotions, I'm actually shivering and not in a good way... poor Gordon, he really didn't deserve this (no one would). that Alex is one freakin twisted individual!
thank god Adam is finally going to the rescue, about damn time too. how come he didn't do it sooner, didn't he already know or at least guess at what was happening, he who always seems to know everything?
and again you leave us with a damn cliffy... grrrr I could so spank you right now and I'm not even a violent person! ;P
please update soon! pleaseohpleaseohplease update sooooooon!
thank god Adam is finally going to the rescue, about damn time too. how come he didn't do it sooner, didn't he already know or at least guess at what was happening, he who always seems to know everything?
and again you leave us with a damn cliffy... grrrr I could so spank you right now and I'm not even a violent person! ;P
please update soon! pleaseohpleaseohplease update sooooooon!
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February 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Poor Gordon! I really really hope that you update this story again soon because it's one of my favorites and I'm desperate to see what happens next!
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February 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! another cliffhanger! My heart aches for G's pain! I really hope that car is someone trying to rescue the poor guy, and that Alex hurts for doing this to Gordon!! Please update soon! I can't stand G's pain!!
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February 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit! That's some serious torture. And Chance knew! That bastard KNEW!
I do hope whoever (Adam?) cut Alex's journey makes the bastard Samu feel hell. It's going to be a hellish time for Gordon to heal. The poor guy's more bruises and broken bones than real human. :(
Btw, the scene, where Chance drinks nd confess, you've accidentally written 'Alex' instead of 'Adam' in the beginning.
I do hope whoever (Adam?) cut Alex's journey makes the bastard Samu feel hell. It's going to be a hellish time for Gordon to heal. The poor guy's more bruises and broken bones than real human. :(
Btw, the scene, where Chance drinks nd confess, you've accidentally written 'Alex' instead of 'Adam' in the beginning.
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February 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
"If there are glaring emails, someone please let me know. :( " lol I think you meant errors XD
so cute
that was probably the only spelling/word error i saw in the story. didn't bother with grammar...
but yeah, excellent chapter! so riveting. poor gordon though...now he's no longer pretty :(
man you really beat him up bad in this chapter...
gaaaah but it's so good. you aren't afraid of roughing him up and all.
i sure hope that's adam in that car. so suave :D
but he took his sweet fucking time, if it is adam. i'm mad at him for that.
anyway excellent chapter! i can't wait to see what happens next! i hope alex gets a really REALLY good beating himself for being a grade A asshole.
so cute
that was probably the only spelling/word error i saw in the story. didn't bother with grammar...
but yeah, excellent chapter! so riveting. poor gordon though...now he's no longer pretty :(
man you really beat him up bad in this chapter...
gaaaah but it's so good. you aren't afraid of roughing him up and all.
i sure hope that's adam in that car. so suave :D
but he took his sweet fucking time, if it is adam. i'm mad at him for that.
anyway excellent chapter! i can't wait to see what happens next! i hope alex gets a really REALLY good beating himself for being a grade A asshole.
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February 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
NO! How could you leave it there...poor Gordon, being tortured like that by Alexander Samu...that was brutal.
Looks like Chance did have something to do with Gordon being kidnapped...I wonder if Adan knew....I did like how Carla attacked Chance...
I wonder what was going on through Adam's mind...
Thanks for the update...I know you said that you didn't beta it, I did notice in one or two spots you called Adam, Alex; but it was during a scene where ALex was in it...just to let you know, how that helps!
Looks like Chance did have something to do with Gordon being kidnapped...I wonder if Adan knew....I did like how Carla attacked Chance...
I wonder what was going on through Adam's mind...
Thanks for the update...I know you said that you didn't beta it, I did notice in one or two spots you called Adam, Alex; but it was during a scene where ALex was in it...just to let you know, how that helps!