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I love this story. *drools* *re-reads chapter for the third time in a row* I may or may not come back and attempt constructive criticism. It'll likely end up as "oh my god this is so perfect and great and Adam is hot and I love Gordon's conflicted nature and Scott is a dumbass and seriously Luke?!"

That last chapter had one of the hottest scenes I've ever read, I loved it!

I definitely appreciated (and enjoyed) the smex but I have to admit I'm as (if not more) impatient as Gordon is to hear some answers from Adam (and therefore am dying out of anxiousness that I couldn't get them in this chapter). Mainly the ones Gordon phrased so nicely in his mind: "He wanted to know how Adam had found him, what exactly had happened to get Carla "out" with Chance. Where they thought Adam was and what the hell was going to happen when Gordon returned."

Awesome chapter, awesome characters, fabulous story *snicker*

I loved it! Great chapter, finally they are together!

I'm so glad he came back to Gordon. No matter what Adam did to his brother, it was justified; and I still think he's a good guy. I could feel the sexual tension in this chapter especially, and that first kiss was sensational. The couplin was HOT. Hope there is more to come, cause I'm addicted like I'm addicted to ICoS. Thanks for all your hard work, it's awesome entertainment. :)

THAT WAS GORGEOUS.
holly hell, gs in love with adam.

YAY! They finally fucked!! and are at a time of peace with each other. Hopefully nothing will go wrong for a while so they can bask in the glow of the new relationship....although that probably won't happen given Gordon's luck recently.

Oh my. They finally had sex, the sexual tension between them had been making its way toward epic proportions. Your sex scene was hot and definitely different, I really liked it and how out of control Gordon was- I'm getting the impression that he generally controls things to some degree even if his guys are bigger and badder than he is. I'm glad they got to talk and clear things up between themselves. Is Adam really going to let him get back to his life right away? I'm thinking the location he's at and how Adam distracted him when the subject came up says that he's not going anywhere soon. And when he does get back is he planning on assassinating Chance? Will Adam train him? Sorry I'm asking so many questions. I just really enjoy your story, I was so excited when I saw you update this today.

Finally a update! yay and such a awesome one to! Finally adam and gordon action. i stayed up reading you whole story to the wee hours of the morn last time you updated. IT WAS LK A EXLARGE VINILLA ICREAM DIPED IN CHOCHLATE SEEING YOU HAD UPDATED! plz dont leave me waiting for long to find what happens next.

I just wanted to let you know how happy I am you finally got back to this story. I am really enjoying it and
re-read all the chapters before reading the newer one as a refresher.

I wish Gordon would stop being so hard on himself about his looks. Beauty is in the eye of the beholder.

I hope him and Adam can work out their differences.

If you have a mailing list for updates, I would like to be added to it.