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Not the "and they lived happily ever after" I stupidly wanted, but in this universe fairy tales are not only implausible, but also ridiculous. Gordon's insecurities are too deep and Adam's duties can't be shaken for the sake of a love story. Even with their fantastic attraction to each other, there is no guarantee about their future: common or separate. The world they live in is just too volatile. It's funny that it's cold, calculated, absolute professional Adam who really wants them to make it and not Gordon, who is insecure and in need (and constantly suffering from lack of) affection.

I love this story!
It has nice long chapters, a lot of action and a great main character in love....the end...please write the one shot! I love these two soo goofy :) not a typical couple but still so sweet and great and lovely and.....

Okay in short: really good work, maybe after a few hours I will be able to write a normal review
till now thank you for sharing this wonderful story!

Friggen beautiful, man. Although I'll be honest that I'm sad to see it end... somehow even though everything's wrapped up beautifully I still wanted more.

Smfh!!!!! It's over!!!! Fucking hell I  mad! I love you man! I fucking love your writing man! If ICoS is the fucking Epicness of Thanksgiving,this is the good old lol family cookout lol@ failed analogy :D  i fucking love gordon with his butterface looking ass! his drugbug ugly duckling ass is epic. And does gordon troll on the net? because 85% of the stuff he's saids is straight up and down some keyboard warrior shit! Adam is fucking goon-squad member #5 ( Sin, Emilio,Kassian,and Boyd is numbers 1-4 lmao) and I thinks the agencies slogan should be "the Agency, we"ll get the job done if we dont fuck it up first!" because those agents gotta fuck up everything! But he seriously cool people. And I must be as dumb ass gordon cuz I thought Adam was putting on a show so Fuck up Inc wouldnt stuff him in the easy bake oven. 

:D and Carla! Ahhhhh! Why was she so awesome! I instantly liked her persistence ass!and I loved how loyal she was to G. speaking of loyality, Chance with is bitch -assness! I swear the tendency to get people killed fucking runs in the family. bootleg sin is a little punk of trying to get G taken out over some damn COOTCHY! And he has vagina in his face all day! No Excuse! Marquis just needed to sit ass down somewhere! Samu twins were like the boss characters in this story and the cameos were pretty funny (lmao at Owen and Sin's lack of home training) 

The lols, the trolls, the action, and the really fucked up monuments is why this I'm so mad it frigging over!!!!!! D:< uuuuuuurgh im so mad! But I liked the open endedness of the story because I. Want. More. XD. You my friend is to awesome. 

wow...Well at least Gordon and Adam are at a happy medium...I'm so shocked and sad to see this story end...I would definitly vote in favor of a Oneshot...sooner rather than later! :)

hot damn that was fun... tho i kinda wonder what Carla and Gordon are going to do with themselves now.

Wow, I'm so glad they finally get together! I feel happy for gordon, since he just went through so much. This is a great story! update soon =D

Loved it! Thanks for the update. Chapter 13 is the best! After all the pent up desire, it's great they are finally together! Love this off-shoot as much as the canon - hoping to see more of Gordon and Adam - so perfect together!

*happy sigh* I'm on cloud nine right now. so happy they finally got together, about time too.
and with this happy feeling me is gonna hop onto bed and grab some zzzs and hope for a nice dream with yummy bishies doing yummy things XD
please update soon

Thank you for the new chapter! It's so good to see things coming together in this complex story. Nice personal touch with Adam's childhood! It's giving him another dimension without making him soft - that would have ruined such a perfect character! Are they going back to the city next chapter? Can't wait for that!!!