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June 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I highly enjoyed the story. I loved how real the emotions were and it had a good pace that drew me into it. Thank you for sharing it with us. I will defiantly read more of your work if you post it.
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June 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hey, Sonny. This is Mint here from the chat room on the slash pile last night! xD I really liked this, and please KEEP WRITING! I'll repeat here:L You're such a fucking good writer. Holy Hell
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June 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hi, big fan.
I enjoy this universe, and I love when new stories come out of it, not just focusing on the Agency. Though it was fun to see Owen.
So I've read the entire story and just want to say that, while I enjoyed it, I wish there might have been more after. Or something. The chapters are nice and long, but it seemed kind of odd in the long-run when looking at certain things about the story. For instance, there are a few scenes that are really long, like the threesome (any sex scene with Marquis really) or when Gordon is with Mark, and yet, to me, the scenes with Gordon being taken and tortured seemed rushed. Also, this whole time we as readers were waiting for Adam to get his shit together and Gordon to nut-up, and then they finally do in the last two chapters. I like to think there is more to a story than just two characters hooking up. So when a story ends after the two said characters have sex, I feel a bit sad. Especially since all the stories I read from you and Ais are brilliant. Also, I would have loved to go more in-depth about Gordon after his captivity. It seemed some details took a back-burner to the sex.
Please don't think I didn't enjoy the story. I did. But as one writer to another, I thought, hoped, you would appreciate construction criticism in a review and not just something like: "OMG, Gordon and Adam are hawt!!11!1 LOL"
Oh, and before I forget. I really liked the humorous little blurbs now and again. The story had such a different feel from some of the other works in that aspect. I found myself chuckling a few times.
I hope you do publish the short story. I would very much like to read that.
Happy writing!
C. Reed
I enjoy this universe, and I love when new stories come out of it, not just focusing on the Agency. Though it was fun to see Owen.
So I've read the entire story and just want to say that, while I enjoyed it, I wish there might have been more after. Or something. The chapters are nice and long, but it seemed kind of odd in the long-run when looking at certain things about the story. For instance, there are a few scenes that are really long, like the threesome (any sex scene with Marquis really) or when Gordon is with Mark, and yet, to me, the scenes with Gordon being taken and tortured seemed rushed. Also, this whole time we as readers were waiting for Adam to get his shit together and Gordon to nut-up, and then they finally do in the last two chapters. I like to think there is more to a story than just two characters hooking up. So when a story ends after the two said characters have sex, I feel a bit sad. Especially since all the stories I read from you and Ais are brilliant. Also, I would have loved to go more in-depth about Gordon after his captivity. It seemed some details took a back-burner to the sex.
Please don't think I didn't enjoy the story. I did. But as one writer to another, I thought, hoped, you would appreciate construction criticism in a review and not just something like: "OMG, Gordon and Adam are hawt!!11!1 LOL"
Oh, and before I forget. I really liked the humorous little blurbs now and again. The story had such a different feel from some of the other works in that aspect. I found myself chuckling a few times.
I hope you do publish the short story. I would very much like to read that.
Happy writing!
C. Reed
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June 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Love this. So much. Want to see more of them --- They are so perfect together. Can't believe how successful Adam has been about keeping Gordon a secret. Would love to see how the agency leverages Gordon to keep Adam in line. Love much!! Thanks :)
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June 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm kind of sad that this amazing story has come to an end but I still thank you for sharing it with us. Eventhough Gordon's life one BIG mess after another, I hope he and Adam will make through - somehow.
I can't wait for the oneshot, though. ^_^
I can't wait for the oneshot, though. ^_^
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June 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
damnit, you bitches always gotta do this shit don't you!? RIGHT at the very end you gotta turn the top into a whining bitch. i hate you. you've ruined my entire view on the story. fuck you.
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May 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You sexy mother fucker. This was awesome. I'm kinda sad that it's over, but I'm still happy as he'll that we still are getting Mist. So yea.
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May 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is one of the best works of fiction I have EVER read, and dear I've read many. I love Gordon, he is oblivious to his own charm. Sometimes reading this was like pulling teeth because I was practically holding my breath for when Adam would appear. Just as a side note I've not read In The Company of Shadows, but even with that being the case I still felt a complete understanding of the world being traveled through. My only complaint is that it is over now. This really doesn't feel like a end to me, but that is only because I feel like there are many loose ends to be tied up and the lack of time telling of Gordon and Adam actually BEING together! I felt like I've crawled and inched my way across a harsh landscape. Every now and then getting a glimpse of water and now that I've reached water finding out I can't drink because it's salt water. (LOL drama queen anyone? lol) Soooooo the point of this review is to manipulate you into writing more Gordon/Adam. If I have not been successful so far the only option left is to tempt you with hypothetical cake. (waves picture of cake around) Look it's *insert your favorite cake here* cake!!
LOVE, Des
LOVE, Des
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May 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh, honey was this good to read. And such an interesting end(rim-job)
I would totally read more abot these two:)))I hope it will be written.
What is it that Adam wants from Gordon?
I'm off to see what else did you wrote:*
I would totally read more abot these two:)))I hope it will be written.
What is it that Adam wants from Gordon?
I'm off to see what else did you wrote:*
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May 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
YAY ending... sort of. ^^
What a fun ride though. thanks for that.
What a fun ride though. thanks for that.