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Adam killed him, didn't he? I can't wait to find out!

I love your story and check here every day for updates. <3

Wow. I'm really excited about this story. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Cool Story Adventure, angst and humor in the post-nuclear world involving a rough redhead drug-selling street boy, meets up-right soft-hearted perfectionist god-like assassin... LoL a match made in heaven or hell... hurry pick one! Could it be that your an actual fan boy, writing Slash? If not, you kind of write like one LOL!!!?!!!

Can't wait to read more, G

this is hands down my favorite story on aff. the character development is incredible! i can't wait to find out what happens next.

Ooooh I really like it. Gordon is really likable, even with all of his fuck ups and his crazy messy hair. I hate Marquis because he sounds/acts like a little bitch. And I'm usually such a softy for the pretty ones! ADAM IS SUPER HOT and I am super excited to learn more about him and the people he works for. Super excited like, I'm currently sitting here thinking up scenarios in my head to solve the mystery of it all.

I found a few grammar/spelling things that were probably the result of spell check auto-correcting or something...If you want, I can e-mail them to you to add in or whatever. OR NOT, I could just stfu and enjoy it. BUT I'm totally free for the next three months if you want an editor/proofer or whatever. Just let me knowww.

As a huge fan of your other work, I'm excited to see where this story goes... It may well become my new favorite story, after ICoS of course.

I'm glad I decided to read this story. I was hesitant at first because of the summary, but it just blew me away with how different and original it is. You did a great job, I like all the characters so far, love their personalities. I'd work on the summary though.

I know this isn't much of a review, I don't have anything witty to say or any kind of critique for you but I definitely like this story or whatever it is. I can't wait to read more, if there is more after this, but all in all I'm interested in this universe, so you go, Sonny.

I reckon this has got to be one of the best stories on AFF so far. The characters are so real. Would love to find out more about Adam's background, and G as a main character is so easy to identify with. Definitely looking forward to more updates- soon I hope!!