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July 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted tot ell you i Love this story I check every couple days to see if theres a update. I love Gordon. I think the Song matches the chapter perfectly. I cant wait for the next chapter!
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July 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Please update again soon! Good story so far :)
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July 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoy this story!
I was angry as FUCK that Gordon jumped in the sack with Marquis, but I suppose old habits die hard >_<
I can't wait for the next chapter! It was nice having 3 to catch up on :D
I meant to go to bed an hour ago...time flies when you're reading a great story!
I was angry as FUCK that Gordon jumped in the sack with Marquis, but I suppose old habits die hard >_<
I can't wait for the next chapter! It was nice having 3 to catch up on :D
I meant to go to bed an hour ago...time flies when you're reading a great story!
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July 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
awesome AWESOME STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I love it.
I love it.
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June 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this stuff is awesome! I don't know how I've missed this story until today.
Love your charactors. Can't wait to learn more about how deeply Mr. Greek has delved into G's personal space.
; D
Love your charactors. Can't wait to learn more about how deeply Mr. Greek has delved into G's personal space.
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June 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Shitload of awesome =) Can't wait for the next chapter =) Funny side note; the security code for the review for me is 'snobbish'...lol
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June 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
got to say i like this a lot and gordon my new favorite stoye./chareicter
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June 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I LOVED the discussion about Carla's first lesbian encounter--that was the funniest thing/best euphemisms I've ever read--EVER. :D
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June 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
My god, you can write.
I read this little story and was pretty impressed, so I check your profile to see if there's anything else. It leads me to your website and your In The Company of Shadows book. I'll admit, I'm not too far--only chapter 13 of Evenfall--but I've been reading this for about six hours straight and I'm bloody ADDICTED.
You have the gift of creating characters that are believable and still fantastic enough to not seem real or monotonous. In After Midnight, the character of the strong, smart, female best friend is often turned into a Mary Sue, but you've managed to keep her an actual human being and likeable.
In Evenfall, there's pretty much no sex. Well... I actually don't know, I'm not too far along, but there's nothing so far and I've been reading a long time. But the story is so intruiging and involved that it doesn't matter, and the brief moments we DO get between the characters are enough to keep us going with the promise that they'll get together but not enough to make the story unbelievable.
Next review will be more about this specific story and more of an actual critique, I promise, but I just wanted to let you know that you're an amazing writer by yourself and the pair of you have crafted an interesting world and fabulous stories to go with it.
Do you sell your books? I would buy one.
I read this little story and was pretty impressed, so I check your profile to see if there's anything else. It leads me to your website and your In The Company of Shadows book. I'll admit, I'm not too far--only chapter 13 of Evenfall--but I've been reading this for about six hours straight and I'm bloody ADDICTED.
You have the gift of creating characters that are believable and still fantastic enough to not seem real or monotonous. In After Midnight, the character of the strong, smart, female best friend is often turned into a Mary Sue, but you've managed to keep her an actual human being and likeable.
In Evenfall, there's pretty much no sex. Well... I actually don't know, I'm not too far along, but there's nothing so far and I've been reading a long time. But the story is so intruiging and involved that it doesn't matter, and the brief moments we DO get between the characters are enough to keep us going with the promise that they'll get together but not enough to make the story unbelievable.
Next review will be more about this specific story and more of an actual critique, I promise, but I just wanted to let you know that you're an amazing writer by yourself and the pair of you have crafted an interesting world and fabulous stories to go with it.
Do you sell your books? I would buy one.
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June 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
""He'd give a testicle to have even a percentage of her sex appeal"" surprised laughter out of me...
hahaha, hes in a right spiel of 'woe be me'.
poor gingers... theres this thing we used to say as kids, its a lil tease, 'id rather be dead than red in the head.' lol...
have you seen what carrot top looks like? hes super tan and super buff. it just does not look right. red heads arent meant to be tan and arnold swarz buff... prove me wrong if you can.
do you have someone pictured in mine for gordon?? silly me, i keep picturing that shawn snowboarder... i dont think hes all that... attractive... i think i see him because ya dont see alot of red head males... and i picture first what i know..... confusing?
what the hell gordon! i thought you were going to stop letting marq mess with you?!
""He did it because it made him feel like someone he'd always wanted to be and could never be while sober."" sad, but true?
argh, hes even using pd when he said hed back off a little.... this man has no will.
the indian twins. what a hoot. this modified thing is interesting. whats it?
carla rules!!! hahaha
lol. this is sorta making me think high school.
nice, update soon...
hahaha, hes in a right spiel of 'woe be me'.
poor gingers... theres this thing we used to say as kids, its a lil tease, 'id rather be dead than red in the head.' lol...
have you seen what carrot top looks like? hes super tan and super buff. it just does not look right. red heads arent meant to be tan and arnold swarz buff... prove me wrong if you can.
do you have someone pictured in mine for gordon?? silly me, i keep picturing that shawn snowboarder... i dont think hes all that... attractive... i think i see him because ya dont see alot of red head males... and i picture first what i know..... confusing?
what the hell gordon! i thought you were going to stop letting marq mess with you?!
""He did it because it made him feel like someone he'd always wanted to be and could never be while sober."" sad, but true?
argh, hes even using pd when he said hed back off a little.... this man has no will.
the indian twins. what a hoot. this modified thing is interesting. whats it?
carla rules!!! hahaha
lol. this is sorta making me think high school.
nice, update soon...