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I need more, this can't possibly be the end! I love Adam and Gordon ridiculously so!!!

I love Your writing style. Keep up the great work

I just wanted to pop by and say that I adored the first version of this story and I am sure I will be wowed once you're done editing it. Although it's hard to imagine how you could improve this story since it was awesome in the first place :). Is there an update list I can subscribe to for this story?
Great work!

I have only one thing to say, your'e a genius. I started this ride knowing it would be good because I read other things by you but this completely blew me away and I liked it far better than everything else. I liked how confidant about himself Gordon appears and how thoroughly you destroyed that image by showing us all the chinks in the armor and how thoroughly human and fucked he actually was. I loved how Adam was kind of described as a robot and how we got to see the robot try to woo Gordon through Gordon's own eyes while the man remained more or less clueless. I love the chemistry between the two and I love how afraid Gordon is and I really just enjoyed the story and the fact that I never got bored and never had my teeth aching from too much sweetness (because I love tough love stories that aren't about the disgustingly sweet fluffiness). I loved your pacing too and your way with words (I have turned a little bit green reading this, please tell me you have to work long hours and almost rip your hair off to achieve that or I might actually start crying with envy). I was told that it's rude to ask for more but, seriously, I would beg down on my knees for more of this story because it is really really good. Actually, consider me on my knees and begging right now. Please, more?

I've just finished reading this last night and I must say I enjoyed it a lot. It was a gripping story and I'm now going to hop over to your website to read the main thing, because writing this good must be appreciated, this was seriously better than many published and printed works I've read lately.

Just finished After Midnight (I know, I'm slow) and absolutely LOVED it! Thanks for a great fic- looking forward to reading more from you :)

Absolutely one of my favorite stories EVER! I sincerely hope that you write a sequel, Adam and Gordon deserve more story. They are such intriguing men, both flawed and broken...yet making an oddly perfect pair.
I'm still stupidly hoping for a "Happy Ever After" but I realize that in the world they live in that would be near impossible.

Wow. This is one of the best original fictions i've ever read. Everything about was fantastic! Only problem is that I skimmed through the notes and only realized it was the end when I saw "the end" :( I seriously thought there was supposed to be a continuation... so I truly hope you do continue this even if as a one shot. It just feels like the story isn't over... thank you so much for sharing and I'll definitely go read your big arc story!

Great, Great story. I would love for you to do a 'one shot'. I love your work and can't wait to read 'Fade'. You and Ais kick ass and are some of the best writers around. NEVER STOP, NOW MATTER WHAT. It would break my heart.

Even though it's over... I seriously have to thank you for this story. It's nice to come by a great read every now and then, and you certainly deliver. Looking forward to the next creation.