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Darasha I am so so happy to see a new chapter. Ubell and Arlyn need to get out of town asap. Poor Nichlas must feel like he is caught in the middle. I know max cares about Ubell but he will have a hard time knowing that ubell is sleeping with both Nicholas and Arlyn. I hope you will be able to write more soon.

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I love this. I love the trio of Arlyn and Nicholas and Ubell. I can't believe Ubell just shot that guy in the head. Yikes. Now that they have joined with Max and Ritter, I am eager to see what will happen.

Hurray! I am glad you updated this story.

Wow! Amazing threesome. I really like Arlyn. He is dangerous but he loves Ubell. I think it is sweet that Arlyn included Nicholas in the party since he probably could sense that Nicholas was interested in Ubell. Ubell certainly is a mystery. I wonder if he was really having memory blackouts or if he was really lying to Max. It seems as if Max might be in love with Ubell but I don’t know if he will be able to help him out. I also wonder if the train derailing was purely coincidental or if it was caused by Arlyn in some way. Love the story. I love the threesome.

This new story has a very interesting start. I am eager to see how things will go for Ubell and Nikolas. I was wondering where Nikolas's mother went off to when the storm was starting outside. I am also interested to see why Ubell has red glowing eyes. I am guessing he has some extra powers. Very interesting. I am off to read Chapter two.

Damn. Ubell is certainly in demand! Is Max really trying to betray Ubell by leading the army to him? I am disappointed that he would be involved in doing that. The story is very good. It also seems as if Nikolas's mother was trying to come on to Ubell. It would be good to give a little more information about Nikolas and his mother. Like why Nikolas decided to run away and if his mother is being fair to him. I can't wait to read some more.

Ooh, sounds really interesting. Looking forward to reading more about Ubell- wonder what's with the voices in his head and if the lion's got anything to do with it? Does his red/slitted eyes mean he's more than human?? Definitely intigued, and love the naturalness of the other characters. Hope he doesn't dismiss the boy next door too soon (although I like Max too- can't choose!) :P Update again soon!!

I am actually really intrigued by this story! already there are already plot twists here in the first chapter haha I of course thought he was going to be the dom to the submissive neighbor next door, but then that changed! and then i thought it was the boy who had convinced himself he was unwanted, but it it's Ubell suffering from an ACTUAL voice in his head. :D love it! cannot wait to read more.