rate_review Reviews

What man would not want their own personal cheerleader? I have to wander if any school would allow them to do something more personal like that lol, giving a football player a cheerleader...take the damn cupcake lol I love that...

WOW, I'm glad to see that you posted the story! I can't wait for the next chapter!

I like Jeremy's rants in his head...he is sarcastic and has wit, I totally love his character! I did like how he explained why he liked cheerleading and how he seen it as not only a sport but a performance...

Luke Welling, he sure is interesting, definitly got the jock vide from him!

I do have to say your 1st person narrative is good, you write it very well! I know you said it wasn't something you are sure about, but with a character like Jeremy you have good handling on his inner thoughts and can convey them well.

there's not much fighting.... I thought there would be more....
But besides that! I think this story is awesome!! : )
I really like the main character so far (forgot his name) He's a man who doesn't play around haha so is he the top or the bottom, i wonder.....
Really looking forward to more. Hope the next chapter is up soon : )

Yeah, short chapter, write more! Now!!!!! Seriously, it's such a funny story so far! I love Jeremy! Cheer Queer, hahaha (ok, that was Luke), and "I'm so fruity I can make punch." Hahahah, I was more hysterical over that than the Cheer Queer!!!!

This is a great story; I can't wait to read more!

Captivating chapter so far. I love how grouchy the main's P.O.V is :D so refreshing!