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May 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
whoa whoa whoa... WHY is there only one chapter of this. I NEED MORE.
This is going to be epically wonderful. I can't wait to see where you take this. Luke seems to have a wonderful personality: he's not overly nice, but he's not overtly asshole-ish. I like the idea of Jeremy having NO interest in Luke.
I hope if it is Luke who admits his future feelings first, Jeremy will have a "I'm sorry... what???" moment. I just think that would be amusing.
more. SOOONNNN. please. :)
This is going to be epically wonderful. I can't wait to see where you take this. Luke seems to have a wonderful personality: he's not overly nice, but he's not overtly asshole-ish. I like the idea of Jeremy having NO interest in Luke.
I hope if it is Luke who admits his future feelings first, Jeremy will have a "I'm sorry... what???" moment. I just think that would be amusing.
more. SOOONNNN. please. :)
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May 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is a great chapter, I hope for more soon!!!
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May 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
So um yeah. Continue please.
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May 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
lovbe it.
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April 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Interesting start, I really think the whole male cheerleader is a very fun thing to read about and not something I’ve seen done very often.
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April 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
The first chapter is relaly catchy, I like it! Please update soon!
Though I would enjoy it if Luke was being evil to him and not playfulxD
But it's cool that jer, is like a really tough ukeXD
Though I would enjoy it if Luke was being evil to him and not playfulxD
But it's cool that jer, is like a really tough ukeXD
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April 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
How cute ^^ "Take the cupcake!" can't wait for more, actually now I'm interested in what other high school stories you've written, I'll go check [wee*]
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April 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Nice =D. I love the 1st person narrative, I never buy books that are written in 3rd, even if the theme sounds interesting. I know that's too picky but...well, I just like 1st more. I've read some of your other stories, though, cause I'm a bit more flexible with fanfic, but I'm glad this one is different. I also like the hate and love relationships =).
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April 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
!!! This is by far my favorite of your stories at the moment, and it's only one chapter. I am immensely excited and looking forward to reading more!
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April 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
usually don't review stories that are just getting started but I like yours its pretty good look forward to seeing were this is going