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chapter 9. heehee, una being tossed around by mother vera looks very funny considering that he crossed the line. i can't wait for the next chapter!

*squeals of joy* chapter 3.... xD wat more can i say?

chapter 4. woot! go una go! vera seem very motherly in this chapter. never thought that she would be so considering of what i know of her from partners and sequel and somewhat from namesake. loving how this is progressing and i can't wait to catch up!

i'm short on time and i need to go to work! lets see if i can get another chapter in?

chapter 5. weee~ i got one chapter in! una's telling of his life while you write it has brought unto me various ideas and new elements to write a new story or implement it as depth into my other stories. oooooo i can't wait to get back from work to read more!

for some reason reading this story gives me the chills

Chapter 2. I'm glad those perverted sick ******************* are dead and I would kill them again over and over just to bring them back to life to relive that pain again and again.

I'm glad that Una was favored and touched by Mother.

Yanno, I'll admit, I didn't really care for Una when he first showed up in Sequel. Seemed a bit of an ass to me. After reading this, though, I definitely see him in a new light. Not exactly pity, more like I can respect him now. Like an acknowledgement of his strength of character. A grudging respect.

it is realy good and to be honest i found una to be quite funny and i love his personaliy lol:) any way i was reading and was wondering about his past so i am quite happy to get the chance to read about him:) this should be fun i can't wait for the next chapter :)

Chapter 1. Wooo~ Go Una, go! Yay! I'm so happy that Una decided to tell his story. -whoops for joy- And I'm happy that Ayato gets to write it.

Una! Una! Una!

Okay, I have read both your new stories and I'm already am excited about them. But I have to say you have already captured me in great interest in Una story "Beginnings". I like others didn't really care for Una when he first appeared in "Sequel" but the guy grows on you. He is mean, opinionated, funny, powerful and so full of himself and I look forward to learning why in "Beginnings".
You have captured a great voice for Una and your first person writing so far is fantastic as I'm sure the rest will be.
I'll be looking out for more soon in both series.

Ltl