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for Beginnings

by Aya

person SunaoTsuji
schedule June 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
chapter 17. this has taken an interesting turn. a second voice and it makes me wonder..... thanks for the update! hope you get well soon!
person SunaoTsuji
schedule March 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Woot! Chapter 15. I was correct in my guess! Boyeah!
person SunaoTsuji
schedule March 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 16. I love how Una took care of things before waking sleeping Rava up. XD Do keep your story coming Una. I've sent my sister to read all about you. :D
person SunaoTsuji
schedule March 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 14. OOOOO Una, do tell us what happens next. I must know! Ayato, if u need to, you have my permission to bribe Una, blackmail him, anything so long as he keeps talking. I wonder if the woman is Ayato and the man is Raya? I'm considering this because Ayato and Raya were before Vera and Una if i'm placing my timeline correctly. And thus Beginnings is before Partners and Tweak is the starting point with Namesake occuring between Beginnings and Partners.
schedule August 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 12. oooooooooo I can't wait to read what happens next! You've gone and strung me up tight and I wanna know what happens! Update soon please!!
person RJaneyP
schedule July 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
What poetically beautiful and strangely bazaar story, but I like it! And can't wait to read more. I like the way you intwine the reality and fantasy, sometime I can't tell them appart...

You said "Mother" was interested in what males do together sexually, Yo that makes her a "Fan Girl/Mother" LOL Does she read AFF TOO?

Impatient and needing more! G
schedule July 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 10. I can see Vera's expression now. xD Woot! thanks for the update!
schedule June 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
chapter 6. heehee, vera is so silly when making her medicine and experimenting them on herself. una makes her look cute at times when she's not commanding and in all powerful mode.
schedule June 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
chapter 7. i had fun reading this chapter. i also liked how vera had the women in the swan room and the men in the stag room. that was very clever on her part. poor una in all his experience on being the catcher he had no idea on how to be the pitcher. lol
schedule June 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
chapter 8. rofl! vera can be unconsciously funny while trying not to be. i couldn't stop laughing and poor una finally seeing some color to vera's persona.