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Chapter 40 & Chapter 41. Woot! updates! hahahahahahahahahahahhahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahah! i so miss paw and his way of fixing things. smexness in chapter 40 was great with Durth unconsciously revealing tat he is Una's beloved reborn. i wonder then if Durth will fully remember all of his past and fall into a routine with Una and while doing so, push the unseen buttons that Una's got, or will he be dazed for a while before fully becoming immortal? hm... sounds off a bit there. otherwise, waiting for the next update!

Chapter 39. ROFL! Go Una! I can't wait to read the next chapter. And if Una doesn't take it up on Durth to "Fuck him" then a one-shot on what happens?

Rest well Ayato! I hope you get well soon!

Hi,

I should have written this review a long time ago. I've been reading your Sidhe fics for ages and, many times, they were what kept me going after a hard day. You are incredible. The world you built, the level of detail, the mythology and depth of characters... it's just too impressive for words. You have no idea how often I refer to your intuitive work whenever I'm talking to my friends about original fiction. Yours is a very fertile, unique soul and I hope one day people will realize how important people like you are. Anyway, I'm just forcing myself out of my eternal lurking state to say thank you, thank you, thank you so much for sharing this with us. You've changed my old-fashioned concept of what storytelling can achieve, and for that I will be forever grateful.

Chapter 38. An update! -squeezes Ayato- Woo~ Ayan did get me confused towards the end there but then again, i did understand it. LOL i can't believe Durth was determined to believe tat he didn't try to drink Ayan under. but then again, did Ayan instigate the drinking so tat he can delve into Durth to see the unseen to find Tyz? i'd like to know how they'd find Tyz when they can't see him and if need be, how will they make Durth an immortal without breaking who he is now.

Chapter 36. LOL I love Ayan and who he learned his slang from. It's like Paw slanging away in Partners. Wait. Paw was being people.

Chapter 37. What is in the apricot booze. I need to know what happens to Durth! Will Una have to come and settle Durth's appetite? I do hope so!

Chapter 34. Heehee~ Funny how Raya and Durth finally figured out that they missed Whisper three weeks back when they picked up Ayan. LOL I couldn't stop laughing when they did realize it. And having Hohi with Ashun and Lillow with the troupe sure liven things up when mentioning about living through their first encounter of Ayan's father when they actually get back.

Chapter 35. Hm... This does have me brooding. And this chapter especially makes me wanna go back and reread Partners and Sequel again. They're so fun to read! Now I wonder if Una will confront Raya about the seal. I kinda figured that Raya was the little four year old that won it in a bet. LOL The look on Una's face when he found that out would've been ridiculously hilarious in a dangerous way. If only I knew how to paint that picture.

chapter 32.... Again! chapter 33. ooooooo Ayan's giving away way too much info. It makes sense if Ayan is Ayato and knows that Raya is his mate. the only complication is figuring out a way to keep Durth together when this is all over so that Una can keep and hold his promised partner. how the cogs of various wheels turn.

I'm still confused. Love all your stories, but so confused.

This story is good. Very good. Confusing, but good, and so are your other stories. The way you talk about your own characters is. how do I say. odd. Like you were talking to them just a few minutes ago, and they confuse you and you question them. And also when I read your stories I start to substitute commas with periods and making my writing more choppy because your writing effects me like that. It's odd. You, you confuse me, and I think you must be a very interesting person.

chapter 27 through chapter 31. I couldn't stop reading! especially since i missed reading when i was gone for a week for a wedding. a week. a week without any internet to read. anyways, woo~ Ayan's home sick, Raya's determined to fulfill his part asking questions, Una's in a scramble to untangle the mixing of time in his head, and poor Durth's going through a growth spurt into awakening. all is awesome in the world of aftermath. i wonder how Durth will do and how Ayan plays a part in his change. Is Ayan Ayato and Raya his mate? will Durth and Una ever get mated and i can't wait to see Mik, Paw, Mwan, and....... uh.... darn! i forgot his name! ARGH!!!! anyway, you get the idea. xD