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April 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yikes. So that's how he punishes her? He makes her sick and gives her a stomach ache? It's kind of cute in a way because it's not what I would think of as a punishment unless it was like nausea or something. Ugh. I hate that feeling when I feel like I need to throw up, but I can't. Now that is just horrible. It's worse than an upset stomach in my opinion. *shudders* Hmm...so now what I wonder... hehe *is liking*
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April 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh I love that Garrick didn't take advantage of her. He truly cares for her. I can't wait to see what happens next.
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April 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying this story very much. Though something was bothering me since the first chapter i believe. Char said that her back was hurt and around her shoulders. But then as the chapters progressed it wasn't mentioned again. so i don't know if i missed something here or if you forgot something....
Well i'm looking forward to your next chapter. Updates soon!!
Well i'm looking forward to your next chapter. Updates soon!!
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April 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Whoa. I've heard that can be torture...totally different from what I was thinking about the drug, but you're mind is so much cooler than mine. Really liked this chapter! *claps*
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April 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love that you are creating a dangerous 'inhuman' fae!!1
keep it up and dont go soft with Garrick
keep it up and dont go soft with Garrick
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April 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Please tell me he didn't drug her to seduce her! Great updates though. I can't wait to see what happens next.
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April 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Quite intriguing. I still don't get the deal with the unicorns, so I guess I'll have to keep reading to find out. =P
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April 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
At least he could of bought her some clothes... LOL! Nice update
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April 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great update. I think I love the aspect that Garrick wants Charlotte to fall in love with him. It's obvious he loves her. I'm curious about the unicorn though. Keep up the good work!!
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April 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great two chapters. The fae aren't as nice as they seem especially what they do to humans. Please continue.