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for The Virgin and the Fae

by atalanta797

schedule June 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I think this story is really good. I'm really entertained by it.
schedule June 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM

“We tried, many many years ago and several times. Each time was unsuccessful, and more disastrous than the last. The final one a full force attack of the three kingdoms on your world, but so many humans and Fae alike perished from the fight between the magics. The taint of the two magics was extraordinarily fatal. With their numbers depleted, the Fae retreated, but not before the humans sent their one of their only weapons after us: the unicorns—“

many many years ago... I wonder how long ago this was for humans...??? since humans had unicorns as weapons!?!?1
person Amanda88
schedule June 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Love this story, please update again soon!
schedule May 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story so far! But why no updates for almost a month? This saddens me :(
schedule May 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
un capitulo hermoso, espero muy pronto otros, ana maria
person kylienna
schedule April 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
My thought on her sickness is that at one point she had some form of cancer. That's just the first thing that came to my mind. Yep, definitely wanting to know about these unicorns. Still loving it!
person ShelleDW
schedule April 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I hope that Locke and Charlotte become friends so that she can teach him that friendship is what brings happiness and laughter. I loved the update please keep up the great work!!!!
person lovelyl
schedule April 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wohoo! The fae have been told off for their treatment toward humans. Great chapter. :)
person Sonyasha
schedule April 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well to the question that i asked before when her back and shoulders hurt i thought that it was something like a foretelling to that she was actually part Fae. You had said it several times in a few chapters in the begnining that it was a possible assumption. Well i'm looking forward to the next chapter. ^_^
person ShelleDW
schedule April 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great updates!!! Keep up the great writing!!