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for The Morning After

by MaruMaru

person daveb
schedule April 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Sounds like she needs to grow up.

Regardless, this is a great fic with a lot of potential. Could use a little more detail on the lemon. 4 stars. I look forward to more.

Suggestions wise, how about some anal, some bondage, some anal while bound and you could have him sneak up on her in the shower.