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schedule October 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Two words. Adorable. Wait. That's isn't two words, is it? See what you've done! You've muddled my brain so much with the cuteness that I can't think!
person Kasbunny
schedule October 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
It has been so long! Sorry I've been away, too... but kadf so glad to see you've updated this! I was wondering what was going on with these two as they hung in limbo! I can't get over how sweet they are. I love this story so much. I hope you update again soon, I can't wait to see things progress more now that the two of them know for sure how the other feels.
schedule October 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really loved the new chapter... I can't wait for the aftermath
schedule October 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh Liz, I'm so sorry to hear about your rough times. If it's any consolation, the chapter was awesome! I loved Sammy's insecurities and also Chad's feelings of insecurity. They were both so cute and nervous.

You know, I was fucking ecstatic when I saw you updated! I was so tempted to comment, just to let you know how happy I was, but then I didn't want to be a pain in the ass! I wanted to read this as soon as I saw it posted, but I couldn't. I had to wait a whole day and night to get my hands on it! Now I can't wait for another chapter!

I hope things are better for you Liz.
schedule October 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yay! They're very cute! You did an awesome job with it. Their relationship is very realistic, both boy's reactions to the other. It's very cute.
person JJ
schedule October 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
thanks for the update...welcome back! I hope everything is okay!

Ah...the oddness and unease of a first date, I think you captured it well...Chad was so nervous...it was cute...the goodnight kiss was wonderful.
schedule September 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
God I'm in love with this story. Seriously. Like for real.
person Kasbunny
schedule September 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
*pesters for the next chapter* I'm dying to know how the boys are doing!
person BEJJ
schedule August 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is great, I love the characters, and prefer this over the love/hate relationship. I'm really enjoying it!
person BEJJ
schedule August 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I like the pacing!! Thought I'd like to see a little more flirting? or action, or something. They all should go camping together ;] lol.