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by iamtheloxx

schedule April 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so much! When Landon said, "I know ... That's why I said it." I wished that he wasn't gay because I now love and want him for myself. lol This is fantastic and I can't wait to read more.
person mw0627
schedule April 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I can already tell I don't give a damn about the teacher, I want to see Lan with Dean. The poor poor man...and besides I like the concept that it's his brother in law, you don't usually get along with those.
schedule April 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
you are quickly becoming one of my favorite authors!!! this story is really deep and touching and i cant wait to see where it goes. i just read the possessor and i love its concept. its different and very entertaining!! i cant wait to read more from you!
schedule April 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter! Landon's going on a date! Nice! Please update as soon as you can!
schedule April 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Lovely chapter. The pacing in this one was good too, you gave us a bit of foreshadowing in the last chapter about Bryce's interest in Landon (sorry if I'm not spelling their names correctly) in the way he held his hand when they first met each other. Everything's progressing at a good pace. I like how everything is developing and look forward to reading more.
schedule April 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You're sure quick with the updates, which is awesome because you have really good stories! Dean is kind of a jerk in this chapter.... The pacing was just fine tho, keep up the good work!
schedule April 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
What a great story! I love the storyline; sort of like Full House w/o the best friend and of course Landon being gay and all....

Can't wait for the next chapter!
person kylee123
schedule April 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Love the story so far.
schedule April 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I just reviewed this a little while ago, but never really commented on what I wanted to comment on. When I was thru w/the first chapter (haven't had time to read the second yet), I had to run and pick up my kids from school, so when I came back, I totally forgot what I really wanted to say! Sorry for the run on sentence.

Anyway....Dean's middle girl, Hannah, was it? She's 12?????? Can I clone her? I mean, my GOD!!!!!! She WASHES THE BATHROOM FLOOR?????? CHANGES LIGHTBULBS????? MOWS THE FUCKING LAWN??????? My kid wouldn't even know how to get on a ladder to change a lightbulb!!!!!!! And he's 12!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! He's lucky he can wipe his own butt!!!!! (ok, so he can do a little more than that, but jeez is he LAZY with a capital L!!!

I want one of her please!!!!!!!
person mw0627
schedule April 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yay another chapter, I think I love you lol. And finally Dean and Lan come right out brush the topic of them. Lan had that smack coming. I know I should care more for Lan and he is great but I can feel for Dean who has to deal with Lan going off on a date. I would be mad to if my wife substitute went off with another man.