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Absolutely LOVE both this story and the Possessor. No idea what you should name it though!

Yeah, what the hell are you doing???? lol

Boy, Dean is really gonna be screwed if Landon really leaves; what will he do? Landon does EVERYTHING for him and the girls!

I really was hoping things would have worked out between Landon and Bryce....

omg you write so fucking fast. i'm amazed. and the chapters are so well written.

end of ch 3 made me tear up a bit ;)

oh man oh man i'm so happy you didn't make dean a squealy slightly homophobic gay (or bisexual) man. i like how he's sort of no-nonsense about his feelings. XD

awesome chapter. kiss him hard!!

i bet dean took that shower after the kiss to get rid of any traces of an erection he had from kissing lan. :P

this chapter was great! i can't wait to see how lan is going to move out. i guess this means he needs a job? interesting interesting.

Well I am shocked. I have been quickly disillutioned about Dean. Is it sad that even when he was compleatly horrible though I still had hope that he was going to take it back or do something to get forgiven. I was kinda right, he's almost bi-polar isn't he? I do not like Bryce even when he has been nice most of the time before this last chaper, I think he's too foreward too quickly and those control issues that is a huge problem. Dean is an ass and a jerk but I still like him ;_; Lan don't leave him, he's only messed up because of your horrible sister. I expect him to grovel now and do everything he can to make it up to Lan so he will stay. Come on Dean i'm on your side, show your colors man!

I forgot a suggestion for the title! How dare I!? How about "The agony of love" it's kinda dramatic...and Lan, dean, and the girls are all suffering in some way from love toward a current love intrest or one that ran off.

OMG this is amazing i hope to see more! i can guarantee that this is one of the best damn stories i have ever read...congrats!

dawwwww so nice.

i like it.

Am interested in seeing Landon's date with Bryce on Friday... Would be amusing to see Dean & children follow the two on their date (My Dad did this to my sister...)