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OMG, how did I just discover this?
I LOVE THIS STORY.
Your characters are amazzzzzing.
I love Landon, he's awesome,
and I love the assholiness of Dean and Bryce.
It's really interesting that he managed to get into relationships with two such fucked up people :)
This is reallllllllllly good, and the kids are adorable.
Oh, and you have no idea how happy the knowledge that you update so frequently makes me.
MOAR PLEASE!! <3

Well, I'm seriously impressed. I like Posesor but this didn't sound very interesting and it is really really good, really good. The characters became alive and breathing, that's amazing. Cant wait to read what happens next. Rock on!

Thanks for the new chapters. I think the beginning of Chapter 6 seems a little abrupt. The ending of chapter 5 has us thinking that Landon should get away from Bryce and his control issues. Maybe you could show us how and why they ended up seeing each other again. Plus I would love to see what Landon told the girls when he was moving out. I am also curious about what Dean said to Landon the day before Landon left. I haven't read chapter 7 as yet. I am about to jump in.

LOL. The latest chapters amused me. Poor Landon just doesn't seem to be getting a break. I'm really looking forward to what happens next. This one was a cliffie.
As for another title, what about Caught In Between or Triangles?

Oh my, Bryce is back! I think it is hilarious that the whole family has followed Landon back to his apartment. I guess home is where Landon is. I think Bryce should get a clue that the time is not right for him and Landon. At least Landon can pay him his money back.

Oh, what's gonna happen next? I can't believe you left it like that! Wonderful chapter as always! Please update as soon as you can!

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Good boy Dean good boy...you are redeeming yourself. He just needs to open up a little more is all, the man is stubborn. But Byrce is a complete bastard, I knew I never liked him. Dean is here to protect Lan though, I have a feeling this could turn into a physical fight. The man is seriously screwed up in the head if he things he can just walk back in the apartment after a fight like that...punch him Dean! Poor poor Lan...it doesn't rain for him it pours, constantly.

I LOVE YOU
So many updates!!! (I'm totally stalking this fic :))
Umm, I think that Dean and Landon should stop talking and just make out :) *happy thoughts*
I lol'd when Bryce walked in (OMG DRAMA)
I am realllllly looking forward to see where this is going!

Wow, two chapters in one day! Lucky me!!!! lol

I was devastated that Landon really moved out. Not as devastated as the girls and Dean (even tho he'll never admit it), but still sad.

I'm glad they're talking, even tho they seem to be arguing way more than talking. Dean really is a jerk sometimes; he never knows when to keep his big mouth shut. And Bryce; WTF's up with him???? He definitely has anger issues, never mind control issues. I guess they could go hand in hand.... I mean, he just went off on Landon all b/c Landon was asking him questions about people he never heard of before. Jeez, take a 'lude Bryce! I did laugh at Landon's comment about Bryce's weird name when all his other brothers had "normal" names!

The paragraph where the kids come up and see their uncle for the first time in a month was really touching. I went thru a few Kleenex's there. Why did Dean not let the girls see Landon? Or was it Landon who oculdn't handle seeing them and therefore seeing Dean?

And Dean's gotta be feeling other things he's not confessing to Landon. A person who doesn't have any feelings other than friendship, or family, doesn't sleep in a hammock where the other person slept. That's like wearing a piece of clothing the other person left behind; just to smell the person's smell and to be comforted. Like a break-up would do....

Anyway GREAT two chapters. I CANNOT WAIT FOR THE NEXT ONE!!!! Let's see what hole both Bryce and Dean can dig themselves into!!!!!! Oh, one question: what the hell is a ginger???????? lol

P.S. I love both the titles Caught Inbetween and Triangles. (Triangles happens to be a gay bar in my town...hahahha)

Anyway, I just wanted to put my two cents in there w/the reviewer who suggested these titles. They're really good.

Caught Inbetween is like that song from like the 70's I think, Torn Between Two Lovers. (Boy, I'm really dating myself!!!!I just like listening to 70's music) Yeah, right.