rate_review Reviews

Still a great story.  Had to come back it.  Hope you find the will to continue it.

Wow, it's been like three years since I last read this story and it's just as wonderfully real and dramatic and fantastically good as I remembered it! Even though it's been a long time since you last updated this story, I just wanted to let you know that I really, really loved it (and still do), and since I didn't write a review the last time I read it, I'm doing it now :)

Your characters are so realistic - they have their good moments and they certainly also have their bad ones. They're wonderfully round characters and even though the story isn't even done, there has already been character development. Your writing style is witty and entertaining but that is probably also because Landon offers such an interesting point of view that you just can't help but be drawn in.

My favorite chapter is probably the seventh with the girls finding out that Landon is the new sitter - I seriously got tears in my eyes during that scene and had to wait a moment before I read on.

So, this is an awesome story that I will probably reread again sometime in the future. Thank you for writing it.

Oh. My. Fucking. GOODNESS. You have got to finish this story!!! PLEASE!!! I am freaking begging you to continue it! This is a wonderful, interesting, and unique story. AND TO END AT SUCH A CLIFFHANGER!!! OH GOD PLEASE!!! I don't know how I'm going to sleep to night not knowing whether this magnificent story will ever be finished. Oh please!! PWEASE!?
Goodness...such a brilliant story. Oh what a wonderful story plot indeed! You my friend have a magnificent brain to think of such brilliance, I am fully enraptured. Please continue this story. I'm freaking going to cry a thousand years if it's forever unfinished...Love this!

-Ritsu

I hope this gets updated soon! You ended it on a really bad cliffhanger, lol :D

this is so full of drama, I love it!

I have very much enjoyed the story up to this point!

Wonderful character and fascinating dynamics!

I super super super LOVE this story!!
(I'm hoping that'll motivate you to update soon, cuz the suspense is killing me...)XD
Also, this awesome story diserves a title, but I'm useless in that department so I can't help you there...
Update soon please!!
~(previously reviewed as kiki)

Hi!! *waves* I just finished reading all the chapters you've published of this fic in one go, and I can't believe I have missed it until now. Talk about feeling like an idiot...

Anyway, I'm really worried about what that psycho will do when he sees them together in the flat... Don't leave us hanging for long, please!!

I see a fight coming!

fuck i wrote a review and it didn't go through i hate when that happens!!!
ch 6: i liked the interaction between landon and bryce and landon and dean. a lot happened!! nice.

hohoho....i can't wait to see how bryce freaks out!!!!

what a cliff hanger.

and dean is being a stubborn mule. just tell himmmmm!!!

can't wait to see how everyone reacts!! awesome chapter