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for Chance Forsaken

by sh3bacatrules

person wizli
schedule April 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Looks promising!. Edward's last-name is very unfortunate, though. It's impossible to imagine anything but Mr Magoo's cartoon, and I bet Edward is not an almost blind old man with thick glasses!!!. Does that make me really old?, it's been ages since I've seen it on tv!. Btw, Toulouse-Lautrec paint's name is "Ambassadeurs", or so Google Images told me :) . I really liked the socks idea, it was funny but endearing and a great way to end the chapter. I can't wait to see what the fates have in store for poor Edward!