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May 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This kid is seriously fucked up. And does Rick have any idea that this kid is killing people?
And Rick has been screwing him for years???? No wonder the kid sees a shrink!
Great story; their relationship is so fucked up! lol
And Rick has been screwing him for years???? No wonder the kid sees a shrink!
Great story; their relationship is so fucked up! lol
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April 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wait, so did he kill Jake? Why? I'm confused.....
Also, a little mistake w/words: in one of the last paragraphs, where Jake finally gets the bra hooks off and he tosses the bra, you wrote he tossed (or threw) the linguine; it should have been lingerie. Linguine is pasta. lol
Anyway, was this a one-shot, or are you going to continue w/the teenager? I'm off now to read your latest chapter on your other story.
Also, a little mistake w/words: in one of the last paragraphs, where Jake finally gets the bra hooks off and he tosses the bra, you wrote he tossed (or threw) the linguine; it should have been lingerie. Linguine is pasta. lol
Anyway, was this a one-shot, or are you going to continue w/the teenager? I'm off now to read your latest chapter on your other story.