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April 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Will it really be a one shot? Please continue this story! I beg you~~~~~~~ This story is very very good!
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March 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
totally loved it...hopefully there will be a few more updates?
Poor Toby, he got taken advantage of...well now he is currently in possession of the tape that Demetri recorded of them...I do like Toby's power too (no on should make him angry, and at least he broke Demetri's nose)...though I do have to say the smex was steaming hot between them, and well written!
Poor Toby, he got taken advantage of...well now he is currently in possession of the tape that Demetri recorded of them...I do like Toby's power too (no on should make him angry, and at least he broke Demetri's nose)...though I do have to say the smex was steaming hot between them, and well written!
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March 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is Phanomenal!
Everytime I read it I get warm and fuzzy inside (which may perhaps just be Toby's Pyrokenesis influance but...meh) Not only because you managed to capture both Demetri and Tobias to a T, but also because the style within you choose to write it is absolutely perfect, its not really from any particular point of veiw, but at the same time you see it from both characters frame of mind, which makes for a very intense and very interesting read.
I would also like to commend you on the astounding maturity in which you wrote this, I mean of course its mature, but who knew with a few twisted adjectives you could achieve such a hightened response, it changes both the imagery and intensity of what your reading. With that said I can assure you I will be dipping into your vocabulary pool much more often!
Finally I'd like to say that I'm so incredibly glad you decided to take our preconcived backstory and run with it! I mean its one thing to muse the idea that this is where they came from, but its a whole nother game when you get to actually have it play out. I will definatly be incouraging you to attempt a few of our other backstories, just so I can say you have fair warning :P
But Yeah Absolutely love it! So incredibly impressed!
-Friend whom you so nicely mentioned in your Profile <3
Everytime I read it I get warm and fuzzy inside (which may perhaps just be Toby's Pyrokenesis influance but...meh) Not only because you managed to capture both Demetri and Tobias to a T, but also because the style within you choose to write it is absolutely perfect, its not really from any particular point of veiw, but at the same time you see it from both characters frame of mind, which makes for a very intense and very interesting read.
I would also like to commend you on the astounding maturity in which you wrote this, I mean of course its mature, but who knew with a few twisted adjectives you could achieve such a hightened response, it changes both the imagery and intensity of what your reading. With that said I can assure you I will be dipping into your vocabulary pool much more often!
Finally I'd like to say that I'm so incredibly glad you decided to take our preconcived backstory and run with it! I mean its one thing to muse the idea that this is where they came from, but its a whole nother game when you get to actually have it play out. I will definatly be incouraging you to attempt a few of our other backstories, just so I can say you have fair warning :P
But Yeah Absolutely love it! So incredibly impressed!
-Friend whom you so nicely mentioned in your Profile <3