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for An Unfortunate Lapse in Judgement

by salival

schedule April 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Please email me when you update: narcoleptic86@gmail.com
person DarkSacrifice
schedule April 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Nooooooooooooo!!!
God noooo! I want more! I finally found a hot fic and it only has one chapteR!!! noooo please write moreXD
person nekosinn
schedule April 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Me like me like... I like how you add the element of having powers into the story...please keep the story coming... :)
person Anon
schedule April 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I usually do not review but I love this story. It was amazing and beautifully written. I hope to see more.
schedule April 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was hot. You have to write more, pleeeaase. Seriously, it was great.
person Anne
schedule April 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was good! I know it's a oneshot, but if you ever think about continuing it, I would totally support that idea! There's so much potential it's almost scary, and yeah... I'd just love to see more.
schedule April 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Aww, man! Is there any chance of a sequel?? One word: HOT!
person kristina
schedule April 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh, this is so good! You are an awesome writer, I hope you continue this!
person Juana13
schedule April 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
oh i really do hope you continue!!!! what happens next?!? Especially to Gray??
that bastard King....I don't like him.....
update soon please! Can't wait!!
schedule April 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
WoW. that was nummy! i do hope you continue, simply didnt want it to end.