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I hope one day you will update this great story with the promised chapter!
And maybe even write more stories!
hope hope hope hope

This was really good!

Ooh, I'm so glad you decided to expand on the one-shot. Demetri is such an ass.. but still so sexy :P Maybe Tobias should go and burn a few more of his things... Update soon!!

Wow, I love how you portrayed the characters and how this is turning out is so enjoyable! Hope you update soon! :D

(2) I like the story but really don't like Demetri at all which is making it very difficult to want to see them together. I'm beginning to wonder if we should even want them together with everything Demetri's done, except for some reason Toby really seems to like the guy (lord knows why). And I get the feeling Demetri isn't about to redeem himself anytime soon so I feel bad for Tobias but hopefully Demetri isn't as bad as he seems or Toby comes to his senses and forgets about him, either way it's going to be interesting to see what happens next :) It's been a great read so far and despite the misgivings about the pairing the sex was very hot - I can't wait for the next update ^_^

Wah, poor Tobias..Demetri is such a dick! But I'm desperate to read more already! What's Demetri planning now? I'm dying to know!

wow this is truly a wonderful story! I love this. Tobias has supernatural ability? Thats cool. And the Demitri really cant seem to let go of Tobias either~

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
I want more! please more! more than 3 chapters!
or 4! I want this to be a complete long woooawwwy storyXd Because I love this! It's so much fun and with lots of embarassing moments!
I was taking a break at the 'Fuck, I love you' part becaue I was like: NOO YOU DIDN'T!!XD
Anyways please update soon1!!!

oooo evil! I like it hahaha. anyway love the story so far King is so very devious, so fun to read. poor Tobias

thanks for the update!

The elevator smex was so hot!! I knew it...Demetri did take some thing from Toby's pants....and now Demetri has the tape and now is reading Toby's journal...I wonder about the thoughts that Toby wrote down...

Oh...my...I can't believe Toby let it slip that he loves Demetri....but I do have to say Toby sure is fiesty when he wants to be, like for example when he talked back to Captain Evan Woods...that was wonderful to see him sticking up for himself...

$50,000 for a blow job...wow...I wonder why Demetri is paying so much for just a blow job...he could have anyone...keep up the good work!

Toby's love for Demetri seems a bit... sudden, not quite believable, but whatever, the rest is just plain awesome! I love how Demetri treats Toby, it's frickin beautiful. And yes, I have a thing for assholes. XD

I'd love to see more of this! =)
~jea