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for A Dragon's Mate

by hellsraven

schedule June 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
cool story so far cant wait to read more. though u should make the chapters longer.
schedule April 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Jeez, I was following this, but then you brought in demons and warlocks and whatnot and now I'm lost! Does Jimmy know he's a warlock or whatever non-human he is?
schedule April 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oooh...and the plot thickens. Now, I'm really curious about what exactly is going on.
person smint45
schedule April 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was great!!! So the dragons are the real thing!!! And Nakamura is a fullblood snakedemon!!! Wonderfull!!! And our jimmy a warlock?? Wow never would have imagend!!! I hope he gets his powers soon!!! I can't wait for more!!!!
schedule April 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow serious plot twist there. I was not expecting there to be magick of any kind involved but it makes sense now. and Jimmy's a witch... very interesting.

Update soon please!
schedule March 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Please email me when you update: narcoleptic86@gmail.com
person smint45
schedule March 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great!!! Can't wait till next time^^
schedule March 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is a fascinating story! I'm really enjoying it! I did notice tho, that you have a few run on sentences. You need to put commas, semi-colons or just plain periods in. Otherwise, this story is great! I can't wait for the next chapter; it seems everyone loves to tease poor Jimmy! lol
person miles
schedule March 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Good start ! I like it so far XDD
Just... Many times, you write *miss* instead of *mess* ;)
Wait for the next chapter...
person smint45
schedule March 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Really great start!!!! I can't wait for the next part!!!! Is the dragon part meant litterally or is it just a name??? See you next time!!!!