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for The Life of Zayne

by RedDragonMistress

person Anon
schedule February 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Good story, I hope Jess gets screwed 364 ways from Sunday!
schedule August 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I really hope you update again soon. I really enjoy this story.
schedule January 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Yay! You updated! And an awesome chapter at that! Clears up a lot of things, of which I'm kind of glad of, since I was starting to go all @_@ Glad to see you back, and hope there's another update coming soon!
schedule January 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Please update this wonderful story.
person SkySan27
schedule January 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I'm glad to see another chapter for this story. I've been following for a while and was worried you'd stopped writing, which horrofied me since you write rather well. This latest chapter was quite good and wrapped up what happened last chapter plus opened up a path for the next chapter to be a good bit of chaos and drama. Keep at the good work hon.
schedule November 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hi. I can see that you haven't updated in a while (which isn't really bad) but I just wanted to tell you - this story is awesome. I am so addicted to it. I've read it over about 3 times since discovering it two days ago! And I would really love to see how it develops. And one of the things I love most about it is that there are practically no grammar or spelling mistakes in sight. That's awesome. I would love to see an update someday, just to see how it's all going to work out.
schedule July 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this story! Enough wild sex and tentacles to get you hot, and a plot mixed with humor, ethics and the general jungle of high school to keep it from getting monotonous. I do kinda wish you included more anal since you only described it in one sex scene. Your grammer and spelling is great. I would like to see a woman be a bit more of a challenge for him to conquer instead of her giving in almost immediately, along with a bit more background on his Dad and his inner incubus. I look forward to reading more soon!
person Zackcard
schedule April 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Certainly an interesting read. It's nice finding something different once and awhile on this site.
person daveb
schedule April 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant. Loved the Mrs Evans scene. I still hope you get Zayne and Jessica together.
schedule April 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Keeps getting better...and funnier. So he's now got a voice in his dreams, way more women than anyone should have to deal with and one of those weird best friend situations. Not to mention the typical high school drama and a variety of other things to deal with. I really enjoy the writing it's fun to read and the characters are great as well. Keep up the good work.