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for The Clans: Lions

by JetLevy

person Pagan
schedule May 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I usually avoid the were animal stories, but something about the summary drew me in, and I'm glad it did. I really enjoyed this story, and even though it was short, I didn't feel lost at all...there was enough information to understand the flow of events. Still, I wish it had been longer...I'd be happy settling down to read a series of books based, if not on this particular couple, then in their world.
person J42
schedule March 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Love how the characters shone and the hot action together. Wish there's more perspective from Jacob - esp. since he could get his pick but still thought this human was perfect. :-) I love Chris' adopted parents, esp. his mum for taking care of him.
schedule March 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG I love these animal shifter stories!! But I must say you should continue them a little I mean what happens next?? Where do they end up living together?? Do they end up having kids with other people?? Does our little uke find out he's part cat and didn't know (since he kind of has some of the characteristics especially when he was submitting) and now maybe he can get preg and therefore they don't need to cheat???? I mean there is just so much that you could get into for these two stories and I think there is so much potential. Since I really love both of them I'm hoping that you will consider making them a little longer....pretty please with sugar on top.
person blur
schedule March 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
is Daniel in love wuth Chris? or just brotherly love? lolz~~~ i like this story.... are you sre you are not making this into a few chpt story?
person tf
schedule March 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
your clan stories are interesting-they seem to have so much potential and always leave me wanting more so hope you continue to share them!
person miles
schedule March 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well done !!
Love this one !
person Juana13
schedule March 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
hahaha awwwwww that was a cute story ; )
wish there was more though, that'd be nice.
Lovely DM thing, though. Sounded very interesitng. : )
Loved this story, hope there's more!!
person Aleks
schedule March 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great story! Nice idea with the clans and a human!


The whole first chapter I was thinking what is DM - have I missed it or so.....? but no you didn´t say :)
person Jess
schedule March 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is fantastic!!!! The characters are well written, and your writing flows amazingly!! Hope for more soon! :D
person Claire
schedule March 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Again, Love! (the negotiations made me sniker)