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for Pedigree of War

by myth

schedule March 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
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person miles
schedule March 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Like it so far !
How old is Jay ?
person cimke
schedule March 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
“All right, you win.” He sighed. “I’ll take you to my place.”

Oh Jay! You should not!!! But I guess, it's too late now. Faolan doesn't seem the type to accept a "no", so there's no escape anyway.
Interesting guy! Loves beating into a bloody pulp, but is disgusted by dirty fingernails, heheh.

Love to read more!
schedule March 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Love it so far Myth! Great job writing "American!" hahah

Jay is crazy for taking that gang kid anywhere! I hope the kid doesn't skin him in his sleep! lol
person Tripliss
schedule March 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OOooh! i like this story so far. Can't wait to see where it goes! Great job!