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I LOVE YOU! I've read tokyo boys, wild pitch and homecoming AND I love them all! Waaawwww and I'm now reading this one ...I didn't comment on your other fics though but I did read them! I loved them thank you very much for posting them! they owned damn, especially tokyo boys I loved the way Daisuke?:O called Yuuto =DDD and I loved reading your A/N about Japan and stuff BECAUSE I JUST LOVE ASIA AND JAPAN AANNNND waaawXD soo much lovee thank you vvery much! you're a very very good writer and it seems to me that you update frequently so keep up the good work WRITER =3 can I ask a question? are you from japan yourself? =DDD
anyways thank you byebye I hope you'll update soon! OOH btw you used Bi Rain as the sensei in Tokyo boys right? God I love Rain =3 (I'm also a huge south-korea fan) KEEP UP THE GOOD WORRK <3

I like this story. I remember reading the first chapter awhile ago. I'm glad you continued with it. I'm curious to find out about Jay's past.

Looking forward to the next chapter!

Continue please. Your characters are either relatable or psychopathic. It's fun to read the interaction between them. I look forward to more so...more!

So, I'm immensely interested in seeing were this goes. The title is what initially brought me into the post the first chapter is what led me to keep reading. You have a nice play on words; I was able to visualize everything it was like reading a movie script. Faolan is an interesting character something about him though just screams that he's not completely human maybe its his eyes or him leaping from that building and landing on those thugs. Anyhow, looks like Jay just became Faolan's know obsession. I really really REALLY can't wait to see how the, Pedigree of War pans out what's to come for Jay, Faolan, and Mr. Logan he too seems like an interesting character. Nice job on bringing your character's to life you've just got yourself a faithful reader.

Sounds so good so far! Hope to see it continue!
-RT

I really like what you have going on here!!! :) it's really...different? other wordly? I don't know how to describe it, but it's not conventional and it's got me hooked!! :) can't wait to read more!

PLEASE UPDATE!
That is all. :)

Yes to be continued! I really like it, and I hope that you will continue to write more!

I am very very interested in this story!! I'm curious about the characters and what could come in the future! I'd love to read more~

Yeah, tear it away.
i want to know more about the cherub with crazy eyes.
And thanks for telling me you finished tokyo boys, I'm off to rread.