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April 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
love the story so far please keep writing!
hope you can write more soon!!!
hope you can write more soon!!!
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March 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great story!! I love it. I hope that you continue on with it.
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February 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Love it! It's fast, complicated and gritty. I hope to see more later. ;]
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October 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Keep! Definitely keep on writing this story.
I like the atmosphere of the apartment scene. Jay is so tense and Faolan so casual and "home". It gives me the feeling some intense thing has started and no way back for Jay. And I doubt only good things are waiting for him now.
Foalan seems to be a fascinating guy. Even you know right away it's gonna be bad you cannot step back. No wonder he is "given" so many phones ;p
I like the atmosphere of the apartment scene. Jay is so tense and Faolan so casual and "home". It gives me the feeling some intense thing has started and no way back for Jay. And I doubt only good things are waiting for him now.
Foalan seems to be a fascinating guy. Even you know right away it's gonna be bad you cannot step back. No wonder he is "given" so many phones ;p
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October 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhhh this is soooo good!!! Plzzzzzzzzzzzzz moooore!!!!!
I love it!!! *squeal* it's awesome! I wish there was more! lol
Plz don't drop it! I can't wait to see what will happen next!
I love it!!! *squeal* it's awesome! I wish there was more! lol
Plz don't drop it! I can't wait to see what will happen next!
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October 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying this! Keep it up!
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October 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story, please continue updating :)
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October 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Me likes :) Please continue! I really want to know where you'll take this. Like why is Jay so antisocial? And what's Faolan's relationship with Logan? Can't wait for the next update!
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October 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
CONTINUEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!! anyways this is absolutely addicting....i think i pouted when i saw that there were only 2 chapters....please update and continue and be great and yeah.....btw faolan is adorable....love his character--mix of sweet but vicious. i also think that your characters have great chemistry...i read both tokyo boys and wild pitch but this couple is my fav already. keep up the good work :)
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October 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This story is cute. I love gangsta fics. Please continue!