rate_review Reviews

Very interesting beginning. I would love to see the next chapter to this story.

Please continue I like the twins. Though Seerva I would think would be used to his sisters schemes.

lol i love how this world is totally different from our own x3 where males are less valued than females. but asides from that, it was interesting =] do keep up the good work

this is a very good start, please update soon!!!

I LOVE IT!!!!! Can't wait to see more. Keep up the great work.

...sounds funny

ohh! can't wait for the next chapter since I want to know how to God looks like and how he acts. Hopefully everything goes well but at the same time that Seerva will go on with this. I understand that he wants to do something for his sister since he is always bullied by others but isn't this the reason why Rashae is so special? It's a marriage for goodness sake! But I guess they are only ten years old so they don't realize the importance but I would think the village would have preached to him on how important the role of the God's bride was. I love Seerva already so I find that Rashae is a bit selfish. When he said that he'll be in a lot of trouble since she is treated as a princess, she didn't even think of him. There's no "I owe you one" or "I'll take the blame" or even thoughts that Seerva might be scared of the god also. I wonder if Rashae is sacrificing her brother so she will be free from a confiding marriage? But then again... they're ten years old which is pretty young... oh well. I can't wait to see how the story plays out and will be waiting for more ^^

good start, I like this story. I hope your road will not become rutted with this one.