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March 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I reall like it...I don't know how much I like the first person perspective because I think it may pose some difficulties later in the story but I'd like to see what you do with it. Also, what was the first ceremony that Seerva replaced his sister for?? Was it like a betrothal??? And now it's the wedding?? Well, I certainly am enjoying this and can't wait for more.
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March 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That poor boy. His sister ought to be more persistent knowing that her bro is suffering like that. Nice chapt..cant wait for the God to appear~
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March 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
The plot thickens!!!I can't wait to see the Forest God!!!
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March 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I've enjoyed all of your stories wat few chapters have been posted of each. I enjoy the premises of your stories but I can't help but wonder if you're actually going to continue any of them beyond the first few chapters?
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March 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This story is great so far! I think for a first person POV, the character has to have a very strong and interesting personality to pull it off and make the story interesting, and you managed that brilliantly.
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March 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I would love to read more of this story. The first two posts are very good.
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March 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love it already! Update soon please!
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March 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
It looks very nice! I'm looking forward for more.
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March 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This sounds like a really interesting, unique story idea! I'll definantly be looking for updates.
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March 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I REALLY like this! Hope you update soon!