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for The Bride of the Forest God

by themutedhorn

person Passing Reader
schedule May 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Loved it! Looking forward to seing more! I love the plot so far XD
person mw0627
schedule May 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Does he really think it's plausable for him to wear all that for even more than a day?
person Dream Weaver
schedule May 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really like your story though at the begining of chapter four he takes his vail off and sits on the bed the hes has his vail on and sits on the bed, a slight mishap perhaps?
person kylee123
schedule May 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I am so happy to see this story again. I wish Seerya had told the Forest God his real name. He should not live in his sister's shadow. I like all of your stories. I hope we will get to see another chapter of this story soon
person kylee123
schedule May 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
The other question I have is how long has the Forest God been waiting for a bride? I am guessing that Seerva was born after the old bride died, so has he been waiting for 19 years? He must be feeling very eager for some human contact by now.
person Rose
schedule June 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Erm... I get the whole laziness deal, cuz I'm pretty lazy myself...
...but just know that this story is so incredibly... ADDICTIVE and BEAUTIFUL that you've GOTTA come back to it...
Please?
With a cherry on top?... or sugar?... or both???
=D
person Anon
schedule June 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Pleeeaase more! There's only three chapters, but I've read them a million times cuz they're AWESOME!
person Anon
schedule May 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
ahh, man! you can't leave it like that! what's going to happen when farus finds out seerva's a male? what's going to happen when he sees his back? :( PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
ASOTA
person wolfi3
schedule May 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Pleeeaaaaaaaaase update soon. I've reread this a million times, and I can't wait to read the rest!!!!!
schedule March 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is interresting! I'll be waiting for more chapters. Wonder what will happen next? Does Farus know about the gender of his bride? ;) How will he react if he doesn't? :) Please update as soon as you can so I might find out. ;)