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Wow! That was a terrific chapter. You did a very good job of getting Samael's feelings across. All the anxiouness of getting his title and wanting to do a good job;his uncertainty of his place among the Seraphim and other angels;his anger with himself for doubting God word and taking comfort from Lucifer. I know you're not suppose to have sympathy for the devil but I do anyway. He's funny in a sarcastic way yet slightly sad.
I enjoyed how you introduced the other Seraphim and sort of gave little glimpses into their personalities. Having read the GW version, I fully get why Samael got frightening vibes off of Asmodai^_^.
Also, I agree that your first version seemed rushed,though I enjoyed the story.. It was like you had to get the story out as quick as possible. Your muse must have been cracking the whip pretty hard~_^. This version is much more fleshed out and VERY satisfying. I am looking forward to the journey you take Samael and your readers on in this story.

This chappie was absoloutly fabolous!!! It kind of remindes me of Angel Sanctuary by Kaori Yuuki but non the less wonderful!!!!I really like Lucifer!!! I really think that he isn't a bad guy but we will see!!!! And I really like his wepon too!!!! I hope you will update soon!!!! See you again!!!

Awesome beginning! You really got across his sense of lonliness and sadness. I just wanted to hug Sam and make him feel better^_^. Looking forward to seeing where this story goes.

This story is so great!!! And so sad and so aw!!!! I really really like the beginning!!!!! I really hop that you are feeling better soon and that you will continue to post this story!!!! I hope to hear from you soon!!!