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October 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh, poor, poor Matthew; he must be going thru so much heartache, losing the only person left in his life. Now he and Liam can mourn together.
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July 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG, poor Matthew? What is gonna do now w/o his gran?
Maybe he can stay w/Liam? He's not capable of living by himself, is he?
Maybe he can stay w/Liam? He's not capable of living by himself, is he?
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June 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh poor Matthew; I feel his lonliness. It's too bad Liam can't explain to those stuffy school people that Matthew is working for him. It's not really any of their beeswax anyway what Liam does after school hrs., is it?
Great chapter; I'm pleasantly surprised at Matthew's aggressivness! lol
Great chapter; I'm pleasantly surprised at Matthew's aggressivness! lol
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June 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
waiting anxiously for more!!!!
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April 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Matthew's so sweet; offering to help Liam, even after what Liam did to him. I agree w/Matthew; I believe Liam will be much better off (his kids too) if he stops drinking.
I'm glad Liam didn't take the aviary away from Matthew; I really think he needs those birds even more than they need him!
I'm glad Liam didn't take the aviary away from Matthew; I really think he needs those birds even more than they need him!
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April 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Poor Matthew; he certainly didn't sign up for Liam's behavior! And Liam really is acting out; he really needs to get some help. Matthew's right; his kids shouldn't see their dad drunk. I hope Liam sees how he's destroying his life, Matthew's life and his kids lives and gets the help he so desperately needs.
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March 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I'm glad the kids are back; they need to get back to a semblance of normality. Their new "normal".
I like the way the chapters and dialogue are separated; it makes it so much easier to read.
I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
I like the way the chapters and dialogue are separated; it makes it so much easier to read.
I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
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March 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh that poor man! And what a great gesture Matthew did w/the bird. Who would have thought of that? Matthew must be a functioning autistic. He seems to speak pretty well.
Good chapter; very sad. I'll look forward to reading the story before it's posted! One of the perks of proofreading! hahaha
Good chapter; very sad. I'll look forward to reading the story before it's posted! One of the perks of proofreading! hahaha
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March 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
wow, awesome story!! i have never read a story with austicsm(sp?) before!! keep up the work!
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March 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm impressed with your knowledge of birds! Good premise for a story; very interesting! I feel so bad for poor Liam (was that his name?) He suddenly loses his wife and now he has to worry about all her birds!
I saw a couple of errors in the chapter. You mentioned the kid's name as Matthew, but at the end of the chapter you called him Parker. Also, the word whipped, for example, is whipped cream. Wiped is the word you want to use. Example: I wiped my sweaty brow.
Anyway, I look forward to the next chapter!
I saw a couple of errors in the chapter. You mentioned the kid's name as Matthew, but at the end of the chapter you called him Parker. Also, the word whipped, for example, is whipped cream. Wiped is the word you want to use. Example: I wiped my sweaty brow.
Anyway, I look forward to the next chapter!