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by anajalim

schedule April 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hope to see Lei and Mason get it on in the future!

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person nivell
schedule March 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awww, I'm loving this story. Lei is so awesome...hope you do a back story soon where you can tell Lei's and Sare's past. I'm curious to see why the king chose them as his personal attendants since Lei is his cousin (ooh, drama!) and Sare comes from a peasant family.
person kylee123
schedule March 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hurray! I really can't believe that it has been a year already. I am so happy to see that you are still working on this. This story pops into my head every now and then so I am really happy to see an update.
person Noir Genesis
schedule January 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
nuuuuu moar!
person kylee123
schedule March 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is my favorite kind of story. I think that even though he owes some gratitude to King Ghazi, Aidan was correct to leave while he couldHe needs to protect sweet Sare. Please give us lots of details on the relationship between Aidan and Sare. They are so sweet together. I already love the relationship between Mason and Lei. They will keep each other challenged. Please keep up the good writing. I can’t wait to see what happens next.
person Anon
schedule March 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Of course I'm eager to see who'll get to play with Lei, and how will you add more depth (background) into his chara.
But still, like I said you might want to write more about the motives this is all happening for.
I maen yes I like your char, ypur story but be prepared when you have a king(or more) you also have court politics, governing(ministers and such) and where there is war there are military personal of all sorts.
What are the cultural differences between the nations that are in war/alliances.
You have a chance to enrich the dialogues beetween the chara's, and to unveil all of this through next chapters.Becasue aren't Lei and Sare entering a new culture, nation and court and military regime?
person Melsa
schedule March 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yay take him and Lei too, poor cuties.
person smint45
schedule March 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great great great!!!! This is going to be so difficult!!! Hope everything is going to be ok!!!! Till next time!!!
person Anon
schedule March 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Pick it up then!
who is this Gaze guy, is Sare really his bed slave and wtf is going on?
Why is Gaze keeping an enemy of his ally alive?
person smint45
schedule March 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great I can't wait for more!!! See you again!!!