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February 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Sorry to be a bug....!!!!!!!!!
Please post more soon I'm really lov'in this story....!!!!!!!!!!!
Please post more soon I'm really lov'in this story....!!!!!!!!!!!
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January 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Nooo Please leave Jack alone it can't be good.
Please post more soon.
Please post more soon.
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January 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely adore this story. I can't wait for her to say fuck it and let Carlos have his way with her. He's has the patience of a saint...lolz. On a side note...his bed must be absolutely massive. OMG I can't wait for you to update. I feel chapter starved. Love your writing. Aside from a few typos and missed words, you have a great feel for flowing words and I love your long chapters. =D
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January 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG! What the heck is happening?! Keep Jack away! Do not let him get too close!! -panic-
I must say the story gets even more interesting with each chapter. You always seem to be able to twist the story in a direction I never even considered before. We're getting to know more about Jack and Tricia's relationship, and Carlos seems to be very comfortable around Marie...OMG, I have no idea what is going to happen next! And why did Carlos call her? -panic- Will Carlos get jealous if he sees Marie with Jack?! -whine- Poor Carlos!!
xDDD OMG I can't wait for the next chapter! Thank you so much for the quick update! You made my day :) I hope you have a great day <3
I must say the story gets even more interesting with each chapter. You always seem to be able to twist the story in a direction I never even considered before. We're getting to know more about Jack and Tricia's relationship, and Carlos seems to be very comfortable around Marie...OMG, I have no idea what is going to happen next! And why did Carlos call her? -panic- Will Carlos get jealous if he sees Marie with Jack?! -whine- Poor Carlos!!
xDDD OMG I can't wait for the next chapter! Thank you so much for the quick update! You made my day :) I hope you have a great day <3
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January 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Please post more ASAP!!!
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January 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm really liking where this is going! Marie and Carlos are so adorable together, and I love how Marie is slowly coming out of her shell. Can't wait for the next update!
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December 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
glad to see carlos and marie moving along. carlos seems to be a patient man. jack and tricia are just annoying. ehy can't they just leave marie and carlos alone. thank you for not leaving me in suspense for too long.
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December 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
.....snap! yeah I just said that...but seriously that was awesome!! You totally made my day ^o^ I'm really loving this story...and grr to Jack, lol. Again awesome!! ^O^
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December 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
ok first of all, YAY!!!! Sorry I got alittle excited when I saw that you posted up a new chapter. And although this is suppose to be a review....it'll be more like a praise ^^ So I really like this story, and you are doing an awesome job!!! Can't wait for the next chapter and again, awesome and thank you!!! ^_^
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December 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm so happy you updated !!! This is such a great story, I can't wait to read what happens next.
Keep up the great work :)
Keep up the great work :)