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Please update its been a while...needing more Carlos ...

I really hope she gets some help. Bulimia is a serious condition, and I hope Carlos can help her get better and come to terms with herself and her life. Great story!

Why did you stoo such a FANTASTIC story......
Please update...soon..

I've seen this story a few times and I kept passing by it,then I decided to read it and I'm so glad I did.It's the best story I've read on this website in a long time.I'm so in love with Carlos. He is the kind of guy I dream of. I really hope Marie doesn't mess it up with him. And I wish she focus her anger more on that no good a$$hole ex-Jack instead of Carlos.And forget what everyone else thinks as long as you to are good to each other and make each other happy.Some people are always going to have something nasty or mean to say know matter how perfect or not so perfect you are. I can't wait for the next update Thanks again for such a wonderful story.

love this story! i think jack is up to something.. hope you update soon!!

I am always so thrilled when you update this. I've been without power since Tueday now after Hurricane Isaac and seeing this when I was finally able to charge my computer with a generator today really lifted my spirits. Having said that I am increasingly worried about Marie's burgeoning eating disorder, but I thought this chapter really was packed. I would like to know more of what Carlos is thinking though.

I wanted to smack the girl at first, because I wouldn't mind having a man like Carlos. But she's growing on me though.

I happen to enjoy this story a lot because of the contrast and how people really are sad when it comes to a few minor things.

I love when you update this story. These characters intrigue me. I still need Tricia and Jack to just sit quietly in the corner and leave everyone alone, but Marie's reaction to them is part of what intrigues me I suppose. I'm not always quite sure what to make of Carlos. There's something about him I can't quite figure out. I am concerned about Marie's eating disorder becoming worse. I'll look forward to your next chapter.

I love this story! Seriously, I'm so hooked on it (I keep looking to see if you've updated yet). For the first few chapters, I kind of hated how hesitant and mean the main female character seemed to act toward Carlos, but now that we've gotten deeper into her character to see all those issues about sex that her mom started and past boyfriends reinforced, her actions seem very believable and realistic. I imagine that this increased sympathy I feel for her also probably mirrors Carlos' own feelings as she slowly reveals more of herself to him.

I can't wait to read more! Keep up the good work and I'll keep giving this story 5 stars and more reviews :)

I jusr don't want her to hang out with Jack and/or Tricia. It doesn't seem like she likes it either and I'm not sure why she is doing it. I was happy to see a new chapter. I can only hope she'll stop feeling so conflicted over Jack.