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April 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is darling. It takes you quick into action and I enjoy how swiftly the tale is told. I cannot see any errors. So if there are any I missed them. ^^ But I hope you write another chapter soon!
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March 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Amon is a jerk still haha. I wonder when Ben will have enough and do something, like tell Amon's family about him or try to burn him lol >:)
Great job, I wonder what Hunter heard to react like that?
Great job, I wonder what Hunter heard to react like that?
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March 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well those were two extremely interesting chapters, sucks that nancy is dead I kinda liked her, but that's how life goes. Anyways can't imagine what Ben just got himself into, looking forward to seeing how that works out. Amon is a dick that's an extremely appropriate word for him, though I can't help but like him, rash stupid irrational vampire who can't control himself. Makes for a good plot.
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March 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Poor Hunter and Ben.....I kinda guessed that something would happen to Nancy so Amon would have HUnter to himself, but I was hoping that Amon wouldn't do anything. He doesn't need anymore bad guy points against him! Ben is freaking out too and that's gonna hurt everyone it seems. I like these short chapters, as long as you promise to update more! :P
Great job!
Great job!
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March 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I hate Amon because of how poorly he's treating Ben....poor guy! I wonder how long Ben will put up with it?
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March 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Loved it
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March 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I am really hooked on this. Amon makes me mad, Nancy annoys me, Hunter is adorable and Ben's cool. lol. I like the story idea, and can't wait to read more~
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March 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Is it too much to hope for Amon to apologize to Ben if Ben promises that there is nothing between him and Hunter? I feel really bad for the roomie lol
Great job, loved the line about homo bunny love!
Great job, loved the line about homo bunny love!
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March 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Always a deal breaker...food on the stove. Good story a lot of fun to read and the regular updates are nice as well. Keep up the good work.
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March 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is truly a great piece of work here! I love Amon and Hunter, and even Nancy a bit, even though she is a gilr lol. I feel bad for Ben though, he's getting the brunt of this it seems, especially from Amon. I wonder if Hunter will do something to make sure nothing bad happens to him? Keep up the great job, I look forward to more!!!