rate_review Reviews

Amazing

That's a good start. :) I'm curious where you'll be heading with this story so I'll stick around and wait for more! XD

You should certainly continue this~~~ Its definitely not a one shot~~ hehehe..

Love it! You need to continue this! It needs to be longer than a one shot!

Oh my this was really great! The characterization and descriptions of the surroundings are so real. And of course the hotness:-) I hope u continue this here it will give u good karma haha :-)

Beautiful story! You really have some great talent here and I hope to see many more stories from you in the future. The nickname "lamb" made the story for me; it was just too perfect.

I really wish this wasn't just a oneshot, it has so much potential for more.

YOU ROCK!! Please keep writing!

interesting idea... i guess everything really can be yaoi if you want it to be...

btw it'd be great if you continued this. somehow i'd like to see where this'll go.

Delectable; nothing quite like a shameless one shot.

So, you caught me in a bizarre rift over your word choice. One the one hand, all of the dialogue was phenomenal, perfectly complimenting the "fairy tale" inspiration of your story; I particularly adored the use of "lamb", as it the deliberateness of a wolf using that on a shepherd was scrumptious and very character defining. On the other hand, I found some of your word choices and phrasing during the sex a bit heavy-handed; unfortunately, this became more acute in comparison to our more adroit phrases. The repeated use of "hole" for one, not that being deliberate and blunt can't be hot, it's more the way you used it.

Very enjoyable; I hope you continue writing. I fully support a fairy tale series, as I for one never get tired of that theme.
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